Comments on: What do you think of this book report? ? http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/1926/what-do-you-think-of-this-book-report/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 14:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: *()()() FurElise()()()* http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/1926/what-do-you-think-of-this-book-report/comment-page-1/#comment-8732 *()()() FurElise()()()* Thu, 05 Nov 2009 14:24:48 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/1926/what-do-you-think-of-this-book-report/#comment-8732 It is very choppy and it is chock-full of spelling and grammatical errors. You should also use expository writing technique, instead of writing in first person.The focus of the essay meanders around too much--for example, the report is on Breaking Dawn and in the opening paragraph you give facts about the authors life--just her name will suffice, talking about her family and birth date isn't necessary. I would re-write it and perhaps even write it on a book with literary merit. It is very choppy and it is chock-full of spelling and grammatical errors. You should also use expository writing technique, instead of writing in first person.The focus of the essay meanders around too much–for example, the report is on Breaking Dawn and in the opening paragraph you give facts about the authors life–just her name will suffice, talking about her family and birth date isn’t necessary.

I would re-write it and perhaps even write it on a book with literary merit.

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