Comments on: Rewritten; please review my book? http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 14:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: abcdefg... http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/comment-page-1/#comment-28119 abcdefg... Fri, 29 Jan 2010 06:47:27 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/#comment-28119 i loved it.!! it's definitely different and not the usual teen topics of books today. wow you're only 14?? so am i.. and i write stories too.. but they're not that good!!! okay, so i'd love to read some more of your work and i could help you out with the criticisms. so you can go on my profile and email me. (: i loved it.!! it’s definitely different and not the usual teen topics of books today. wow you’re only 14?? so am i.. and i write stories too.. but they’re not that good!!! okay, so i’d love to read some more of your work and i could help you out with the criticisms. so you can go on my profile and email me. (:

]]> By: Just Me http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/comment-page-1/#comment-28117 Just Me Fri, 29 Jan 2010 06:47:27 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/#comment-28117 Okay,honesty here I think its pretty good,for a 14 year old you need some work on giving more deatil and seperating basic stuff..or not mix all of it up but besisdes that its really good especially since I know its really hard to start writing a book.trust me I want to be an author 2 Okay,honesty here

I think its pretty good,for a 14 year old
you need some work on giving more deatil
and seperating basic stuff..or not mix all of it up
but besisdes that its really good
especially since I know its really hard to start writing a book.trust me
I want to be an author 2

]]> By: Gamer http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/comment-page-1/#comment-28118 Gamer Fri, 29 Jan 2010 06:47:27 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4178/rewritten-please-review-my-book/#comment-28118 I like it, its my kinda book fantasy. Theres nothing wrong with it but i'd kinda give her a more interesting job like assasin or something. It is very discriptive, and like all books it gave me a picture in my mind, So thanks for that nice little story. I like it, its my kinda book fantasy. Theres nothing wrong with it but i’d kinda give her a more interesting job like assasin or something. It is very discriptive, and like all books it gave me a picture in my mind, So thanks for that nice little story.

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