i don’t know if any of you will believe me but just read the question?
ok here my life story i was born 1605 when i was four years old i got lost i had walked up to a house and knocked on the door
a guy greeted me and let me in the next thing i knew he grabbed me by the arm and tried to drink my blood
then there was a flash a guy covered in the blood of the other guy turned to me and said "are you okay" i said i was ok he then took me to a woman’s house her name was karen she was also a vampire the vampire who saved me his name was draven
karen always watched me while draven was busy
when i was five i met a girl named slaine i was at dravens house when karen came in with a young boy covered in blood
she said his name was zero and he was a survivor of a vampire attack and that he had been turned
no one went near him but me they were afraid he would drain them
so i was the one to get him cleaned up the bite marks on his neck were deep he was only five
the reason i actually went near him is that i knew his pain because like him my family had been killed by a rogue vampire i was able to run away though i hadn’t been turned
zero and me were good friends when i was six and slaine was eight pheonix and lennix became my cousins by marriage and uruha became her cousin by marriage
she always picked on uruha because he always smelt like marsmallows and was good with helping plants grow well actually that was his power i had been sitting in a corner reading when slaine burst out laughing she turned to me and said "khaos isnt uruha so much like a girl" i looked up and saw uruha crying i looked at her with a death glare stood up walked to slaine and slapped her across the face i yealled at her "what the hell slaine! your picking on your cousin so much that hes crying just leave him the hell alone for once in your pitiful life!" she then ran away crying while i comforted uruha
the question is is how am i only thirteen years old know instead of dead and do you believe me
my memories have very recently come back to me i was born in athens slaine was born somwhere in greece
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Number one, your sentence construction is quite definitely that of someone very young. If you had lived 405 years you would be much more mature in your thought processes and use of the English language.
Number two, "Draven" isn’t a period first name. It became recently popular after the movie "The Crow" used it as the main character’s name – Eric Draven, or Eric D Raven, which is simply a clever play on words to reflect the name of the movie.
If you were living with "Draven" and "Karen", and they were vampires as you said, why would they be afraid of "Zero"? They certainly wouldn’t be afraid of another vampire.
You say first you were lost and just happened to find a vampire’s house. Yet later you say that your family was murdered by a vampire. In 1605 people in the U.S. were not living side by side the way they do now, except in the small cities that eventually grew into our modern urban sprawls. Your nearest neighbor would have been fairly far away. In such a world it would have been impossible for a vampire to have existed without the locals becoming suspicious about the house occupied by an owner who never comes out during the day or eats regular food. In those days locals knew each other, worked side by side with each other. A "neighbor" who never farmed or bought food at market would have been a cause for interest.
If "Pheonix" and "Lennix" became your cousins by marriage, then I suppose your family wasn’t murdered after all. "Uhura" is an African FEMALE name. The Caucasian peoples of that time period would not have given their children the name of what was considered to be heathen tribes. Therefore it is highly unlikely that any of your family (oh, weren’t they all murdered?) would have married a woman from an African tribe. It is even more likely such a woman would have been (at least in the U.S.) a slave, and would have been given a "Christian" name. But wait, you say the name is actually Uruha, and it’s a male name. Not to mention the obvious modern reconstruction of the word Chaos into "Khaos" as a name.
These names are not period names for the 1600′s. Not only that, but you fail to mention country, village, region, names of important personages of the day, or any of a hundred thousand little details that a person alive for over four hundred years would know.
Instead you come up with a poorly written piece of fiction and attempt to pass it off as proof of vampires and try to use it to make yourself look mysterious and important.
Edit: So now you are all Seventeenth century Greeks. Without Greek names. Explains a lot.
Who are you trying to fool?
http://www.southparkstudios.com/episodes/210813/ watch this and you will know what I think.
Believe you? Not a chance. But you do have a great imagination! You need to think about becoming a writer. How do I know this?
I’m a Psychic.
idk if i believe u! truth to say that is one story if it is true! wow! god was on youre side thats how u didnt die
i do belive you but i belive in these things. maybe ur only 13 now because ur aging is slowing because of the vampire venim(what ever it was) is chaging your body.
Sorry, unless you can remember the town, the mayor, the king or queen at the time, the neighbors, or any documented proof..I’d say you had better make money writing stories.
No, I do not believe this for one minute.So I guess I’m supposed to believe you only aged thirteen tears in four hundred and five years.
too many vampire tv shows these days…
I believe you a whole lot. I have read several cases of Vamps, Wolves and such, I myself presume to become more wolf like. More like a werewolf. (No not the physical kind. that doesn’t happen unless u were god) A mental werewolf… still with all their abilities but none of the physical characteristics. I know people also say were crazy but then again. Nothing is impossible and the sky is the limit…
Uh, no. Go play with your Barbies.