http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 14:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/comment-page-1/#comment-29210 Lanie Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:11:31 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/#comment-29210 I think for a review this is way too lengthy, try working on summarizing the movie more, use more adjectives and words that really brings the movie alive for the viewers. I think for a review this is way too lengthy, try working on summarizing the movie more, use more adjectives and words that really brings the movie alive for the viewers.

]]> http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/comment-page-1/#comment-29211 Justbeingme Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:11:31 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/#comment-29211 it seems as though it is more of a summary, than an analysis of the movie. You should go into the techniques used in the movie and the depth of the characters. it seems as though it is more of a summary, than an analysis of the movie. You should go into the techniques used in the movie and the depth of the characters.

]]> http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/comment-page-1/#comment-29209 silentscreamer Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:11:29 +0000 http://howdoigetmyexboyfriendback.org/4320/can-i-have-some-suggestions-how-i-can-make-this-better-please-its-a-movie-review-for-the-illusionist/#comment-29209 First of all it is a bit too long...and you give far too many details about the plot of the movie. No one likes a spoiler. The rhythm is all wrong in this...it reads like a book report that you were forced to write about a book you didn't like but have to put a positive spin on it. When reading it...although you say it was good...one doesn't really get a sense of that from reading it. Did you like this movie really? Why? Was it stunning visuals? Character interaction? Was it a well written script? Was the dialog believable? You didn't discuss the cinematography at all. Also....satisfyingly? That is not a description that would get people to the theaters. Good luck. First of all it is a bit too long…and you give far too many details about the plot of the movie. No one likes a spoiler. The rhythm is all wrong in this…it reads like a book report that you were forced to write about a book you didn’t like but have to put a positive spin on it. When reading it…although you say it was good…one doesn’t really get a sense of that from reading it. Did you like this movie really? Why? Was it stunning visuals? Character interaction? Was it a well written script? Was the dialog believable? You didn’t discuss the cinematography at all. Also….satisfyingly? That is not a description that would get people to the theaters. Good luck.

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