This poem/letter isn’t completed but I wanted to know what you guys think of it so far. To save you from confusion, let me tell you what this is about:

This poem is about a book i read. its for a guy character in the book. his name is Jonaro. and there’s a girl name Rosalie. (she calls him romeo as a pet name) They are secretly seeing each other, and engaged. They plan on spending life together. the thing is that certain people can NOT find out about Rosalie and Jonaros relationship or rosalia would get killed by them. Jonaro would probably get killed too; but Rosalie’s in the most danger. before the conclusion of the story happened, rosalie rote jon a note. the book never mentioned the note again. My assignment from my english teacher is to write a poem/letter that I think would be similar to the one she wrote Jonaro. Opinions , please!

Dearest Romeo,

We’ve been together for quite a while.
The thought of that makes me smile.
You’re there for me whenever I fall;
all it takes is a simple call.
It’s all almost to good to be real.
Every time I try to explain how I feel,
It ends in frustration
‘Cause I can’t give an explanation
that can prove to you
my feelings are true.
At my darkest times,you bring me light
Without even trying; even if we’re in a fight.
You’re the beat to my heart.
You’re the best part
of me.
Can’t you see
that you’re my best friend
and my lover, til the end?
I don’t know what’s going on in this world.
Everything’s all screwed up and twirled
around in lies and confusion
but the conclusion…
is that you’re the only thing that makes sense.
Our relationship is like commonsense
‘Cause we’re a perfect match.
Sorry, but I’ve grown quite attached.
You’re like the song that makes me sing aloud.
I can’t imagine not having you around.
You’re as sweet as the first spring breeze.
When you look at me, my heart seems to freeze.
I regret everytime I’ve ever made you hurt.
And those memories make me feel like dirt.
I guess God sometimes puts our love to the test.
But, Baby, I know you deserve the best.
I know I screw up a little too often.
and the consequences never seem to soften.
I know I should treat you better;
so here I am, sending you this letter.
We’ve made plans time and time again.
You say ‘marriage’ and I’m wondering when…
Baby, I don’t mean to sound like a jerk,
but I’m wondering if we can make this work.
We’ve got a long, hard road ahead.
I don’t want either one of us to end up dead.
Secrets are best kept when nobody knows them.
You’re the last person I’d ever want to condemn;
but everyone knows how much we love each other
the book is kind of very similar to romeo and juliet…(rosalie notices this, which is why she calls him romeo)


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