i wrote a love poem PLZ tell me what u think ?
You say u don’t but I they say you do
I don’t know who to believe
I don’t know what to do
I want to love you
But I want to hate you
I want to think they are all wrong
And that you are perfect
Your strong hot nice and fun to be with
But what I didn’t know is I got you all wrong
You’re strong but not strong enough
Your hot but not hot enough
You’re nice but only when you want something
And you’re fun but not fun enough for me
What I thought was the perfect guy is nothing more than your normal every day man whore
I hope I don’t feel for you any more
Your kisses are sweet
But never sweet enough
To cover
The pain you have caused me
You must not feel for me
Because you no longer adore me
It was a one day thing
I hope your girlfriend understands
I’m glad its over
Cuz you don’t deserve me
you don’t deserve some one who loved you so truly and pure
Now I have to find a cure to mend my broken heart
There are many fish in the sea
But you are no longer for me
So please let me be
We can still be friends
But I need some time to think
I need some time to know
If I should ever forgive you for making my heart shrink
I just need some time to grow
Maybe we can try it again
Like you said every one deserves a second chance
But I will never forget when
Our hearts connected our lips touched and I was in love
My heart did a dance
It was young romance
Now all I need is a little shove
To get back to the now
The present were you have a girlfriend
And I have no one
Now I will have to allow
The time for my heart to comprehend
The changes of everything to become undone
I’m crushed
But I don’t expect you to care
ummm well i didn’t finish it yet but i wanna know if its good or if im just wasting my time cuz it sucks
hey i just wanted to say im 13 soo yea this is what i wrote and how i felt or still feel about a guy i had a one day relationships with
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I liked it. It was very emotionally deep. I would finish her up, you never know when you may need to withdraw this memory.
Best of luck with the guy, and if he is one who takes advantage of others, don’t let him do so to you.
Poetry takes a long, long time to perfect.
Tormenting – Lovely riddle