Is this a good essay?
I know it’s not that good, but who cares.
Doesn’t have to be perfect.
I just want some ideas to add (about clowns)
Y!A YOU MOST LIKELY WONT READ THIS BUT.. WHATEVER.
Clowns are comical performers. They are artists who pretend to be foolish and entertain their audience. Known for their outrageous costumes and makeup, clowns are normally criticized by their appearance. Clowns entertain folks by performing in odd or hilarious ways. Also, by doing many tricks, some even magic. Clowns can be seen at circuses, fairs, on the street, and on stages.
Types of clowns include European Whiteface, Straight Whiteface, Grotesque Whiteface, Auguste, Tramp/Hobo, and Character Clowns. The Whiteface clowns are oldest types of clowns in existence. They wore white make-up, and wore elegant costumes. They were also known for all of their physical stunts, like springing from one platform to another, or tumbling, etc. Auguste clowns became popular in around the 19th century. Their costumes consisted of colorful mismatched clothing, big red noses, and colorful wigs. These types of clowns use gags like the pie in the face, and using seltzer bottles. Also, these clowns tumble in their performance, and they tend, in their acts, be more physical. A tramp or a hobo clown wear dark make-up and usually impersonate fireman, policeman, and cowboys. These types of clowns were created by Otto Grielberg in the United States. Their performance includes miming, juggling, magic tricks, and acrobats.
Many people have an intense fear of clowns. This fear is called coulrophobia. This phobia is mostly common around children. Some reasons people mostly fear clowns is because of how the media portrays them- as evil. For example, the movie made in 1990 called ‘It,’ or when clowns, in their acts, perform violence, like hurting another clown, (of course it’s fake.)
How do you become a clown? You can become a clown by always being filled with joy, and maintaining you cool. You’ve got to know where you do your clowning acts, and the type of entertainment you want to show. You’ve also got to be enthusiastic, outgoing, and to not really care what people say about you. You’ve got to study the origins of clowns, and learn to apply make-up. You’ve got to learn the three main types of clowns, and learn each one’s performance, outfits, and personalities. You need to know the type of clown you are perspiring to be and the type of business you’d want to run. Clowns love being around people, they are humorous, but also professional. You need to know how much make-up is too much, and what kind of make-up you’ll be using. To learn to be a clown, you can go to clown school. You can read books about clowns. You can have a clown mentor, who will help you with developing your personality, or help choose which type of clown would suit you. They will develop new skits, jokes, etc. Clown mentors can also teach you about balloons, face painting, new skits, jokes, fun gags, and more. To start a clown business, you can start small and then rise gradually. Like, showing up at birthday parties or on the street, then
performing at fairs, or joining the circus. When you become a clown, you need to buy props. Possibly a Stage, balloons, cards, outfits, make-up, wigs, shoes, bikes, unicycles, juggling tools, and more. Becoming a clown is hard work.
Personalities of a clown can include, evil clowns, sad clowns, clumsy clowns, and tricksters. Evil clowns started in American pop culture. The Joker, from Batman was one of the first evil clowns in the media. Sad clowns usually paint a frown on their face, and a tear coming from their eyes. These clowns look depressed. Clumsy clowns might trip and fall, stumble around on purpose. They also might put themselves in painful situations. Tricksters are tricky clowns. They can pull pranks on you, perform magic tricks, and do crazy things.
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I’m putting the corrections in brackets in capitals; I’m not shouting
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Clowns are comical performers. They are artists who pretend to be foolish [TO] entertain their audience. Known for their outrageous costumes and makeup, clowns are normally criticized [FOR] their appearance. Clowns entertain folks [PEOPLE] by performing in a [COMMEDIA DEL ARTE FASHION]. [THEY CONSTRUCT MAGIC TRICKS, AND SOMETIMES PERSONALIZE PRANKS WITH AUDIENCE MEMBERS]. Clowns can be seen at circuses, fairs, on the [STREETS], and on stages.
Types of clowns include [THE] European Whiteface, Straight Whiteface, Grotesque Whiteface, Auguste, Tramp/Hobo, and Character Clowns. The Whiteface clown [IS] [THE] oldest type {SINGULAR} of clown in existence. They [WEAR] white make-up, and {DELETED WORD} elegant costumes. They [ARE] also known for {TWO WORDS DELETED} their physical stunts, [SUCH AS] springing from one platform to another, or tumbling, etc. Auguste clowns became popular [2 DELETED WORDS] around the 19th century. Their costumes consist {PRESENT TENSE} of colorful mismatched clothing, big red noses, and colorful wigs. These types of clowns use gags like the pie in the face, and [DELETED WORD] seltzer bottles [TO SPRAY THE AUDIENCE (?)]. Also {STOP STARTING SENTENCES WITH ALSO!!!} [AS WELL] these clowns tumble in their performance, and [DELETED WORD] tend [-] in their acts [-] be more physical. A tramp or a hobo clown wear dark make-up and usually impersonate fireman, policeman, and cowboys. These types of clowns were created by Otto Grielberg [OF] the United States. Their performance includes miming, juggling, magic tricks, and acrobats.
Many people have an intense fear of clowns. This fear is called [ITALICIZE]coulrophobia. This phobia is [DELETED] common around children [BUT THERE ARE EXCEPTIONS]. [THE REASON WHY COULROPHOBIA HAS INCREASED] [DELETE THIS SENTENCE, IT IS A GENERALIZATION, AND CONSTRUCTED POORLY]- Some reasons people mostly fear clowns is because of how the media portrays them- as evil. For example, the movie made in 1990 called ‘It,’ or when clowns, in their acts, perform violence, like hurting another clown, (of course it’s fake.)
I’ll rewrite that sentence: THE REASON WHY COULROPHOBIA HAS INCREASED, OWES TO A FEW SELECTIVE MEDIA INTERPRETATIONS. THE 1990 MOVIE "IT" PORTRAYED A SADISTIC CLOWN THAT MORPHED INTO A TARANTULA (right?).
How [DOES ONE] {DON’T EVER ADDRESS THE READER} become a clown? [ONE] become [S] DELETE SENTENCE- [a clown by always being filled with joy, and maintaining you cool] [A CLOWN BY HAVING A NATURAL EXCESS OF JOY AND BEING PATIENT]. [ONE] [MUST] [KNOW THEIR MATERIAL AND WHERE TO DISPLAY IT]. [REDUNDANCY- DELETE]-You’ve also got to be enthusiastic, outgoing, and to not really care what people say about you. [AN INDIVIDUAL MUST UNDERSTAND THE HISTORY, AS WELL AS APPLY THE EXTERNAL FEATURES TO MAINTAIN AUTHENTICITY]. [REDUNDANCY, DELETE]-You’ve got to learn the three main types of clowns, and learn each one’s performance, outfits, and personalities. {You need to know the type of clown you are perspiring [HAHA! ASPIRING, NOT PERSPIRING] to be and the type of business you’d want to run} (DELETE THE SENTENCE WITH THE PERSPIRE REMARK AND REPLACE WITH THE FOLLOWING]: OWING TO THE FACT THAT THERE ARE MANY CLOWN TYPES, MOST PERFORMERS OF THIS GENRE CHOOSE ONE PARTICULAR TYPE. THE TYPE OF CLOWN CHOSEN DOES NOT DISREGARD THE FACT THAT THE INDIVIDUAL MUST BE JOYFUL, PEOPLE ORIENTED AND FREE OF A CRIMINAL RECORD.
I DELETED THE REST; THE READER GETS WHAT A CLOWN IS.
[IN DRAMA] Personalities of a clown can include, evil clowns, sad clowns, clumsy clowns, and tricksters. Evil clowns started in American pop culture. The Joker, from "Batman" was one of the first evil clowns in the media. Sad clowns usually paint a frown on their face, and a tear coming from their eyes. [DELETE]These clowns look depressed. [THE ROUTINE OF A CLUMSY CLOWN IS SELF- EXPLANATORY]. [LASTLY, A TRICKSTER'S ROUTINE IS TO PERFFORM MAGIC TRICKS.]
YOU DON’T HAVE A CONCLUDING SENTENCE HERE’S ONE:
CLOWNS REMAIN VERY POPULAR TODAY BECAUSE THEY SPEAK TO JUVENILES (WHO HAVE NOT BEEN AFFECTED BY CINEMA) AS BENINE GOOFBALLS, AND TO OLDER INDIVIDUALS AS AN ENIGMATIC FIGURE WITH TOXIC MOTIVES.
I’m just wondering, what State and grade are you in to receive an essay topic such as clowns?
I only read the beggining
u should start with a cool fact about clowns
or a common question about clowns too get the readers attention
i might have kept reading it if u started it better
You could correct some grammar mistakes. In the first paragraph you start almost every sentence with clowns and in the fourth you use "You’ve" and "You" repetitively.