What do you think of this poem? Title:On the wings of dreams!?
On the Wings of Dreams
I’m flying free
with a dreamer’s dream,
To a land without fear, darkness, and doubt;
Where shadows and hauntings
of all time and space,
Are rainbows with colors that endlessly grace…
happiness, hope, and all joys to embrace.
A land with no storms, without pouring rains,
where changes abound and great comfort remains;
Where all hate is replaced,
all questions erased;
Where new memories are shaped,
with wonderous light…
of romance and love, before out of sight;
A dreamland of heaven without jaded thought,
where butterflies are free,
their colors uncaught;
With milk oceans to see,
fresh air to breathe;
Countless flowers and trees,
fragrancing the soft whispering breeze.
No more webs of deceit,
where lovers have fought;
No battles of hopelessness,
where all love is lost.
Maybe our dreams hold the land of our thoughts,
Or maybe our hearts have learned lessons well taught.
It is the stairway to heaven,
this dreamland we seek…
Hopefully for all is more than a peek…
at a future end to the ultimate pain,
of great loyalty and love…
lost and estranged.
This dance of life I endlessly write,
Is an end to the pain, and every soul’s light.
To a life fulfilled at the end of our time…
to dream second chances for new love we can find.
Here’s to all of us ending our heavenly climb,
With the company of romance and lovelight sublime.
Please leave positive comments,and please if you have any extra words to this poem i’d be happy to add them in! ![]()
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I’d commend you for writing such a lengthy poem. Writing long poems take a lot of patience.
here’s some writing tips that may help you in your next poem:
http://writinghood.com/style/how-to/write-better-metaphors-and-better-poetry/
keep writing
The poem’s positive message is great! You really deserve to be commended for patiently writing a lengthy poem.
Great job!
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Great Job on writing this long yet inspiring poem!
Well, either this is a really long poem or a song by R.Kelly? Just kidding. No actually I admire you for taking so much time to write this. Your blog is really growing. Good job!
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