rate my lyrics 1-10 please i need to kno if i can go far?
i walked away
alone on a rainy day
she was still on my mind
nostop all the time
but as i thought about it throught the day
the love her ran away
u were to worryed about other guys
to busy cryign about other lyes
im tired of hearing ur cry
u had ur chance and u let it past ur eyes
andas i look bak now and then
im glad i was always only a friend
thre was a girl mean and cold
but every where she went romance rose
she was like potsmoke
so addicting
but a bad infection
like a bad conection
a bad date
a bad mistake
a bad fate
but i just couldnt get enough
some might just say i was in love
but i like to say it was lust
so i saw her crying near the pond
i found it rely odd
since usally the guys were crying
now it was like she was dying
she looked at me and asked for help
i tyed to stop myself
but i was to influenced with her smell
it was like from heaven i fell
in a spilt second everythign turned gray
and she began to walk away
i watched her leave
infront of me
i walked away
alone on a rainy day
she was still on my mind
nostop all the time
but as i thought about it throught the day
the love her ran away
u were to worryed about other guys
to busy cryign about other lyes
im tired of hearing ur cry
u had ur chance and u let it past ur eyes
andas i look bak now and then
im glad i was always only a friend
the next day i saw her there
saw her in place i cant belive where
she ran up tome and gave me a hug
it was like she pulled my heart right back under the rug
i try to bury my love her
i tryd to forget loving her
i tryd to let go of her
i tryd to lie to her
see i dont y
but ihad to say good bye
but how can i say i love u to someone like her
someone who was untouchble to me
someone who would never like me
someone to high up in socity
someone who had a boyfriend better than me
the was i knew this person to
the kid she loved was a great man through and through
i payed my respect
i gave my due
but through all aspect i was more crushed then u
see i didnt kno wat to expect
from a crazy like vexy
a tranfixed imagination
a fucked up imatation
everythign i tryd to do
was always thinking of u
i walked away
alone on a rainy day
she was still on my mind
nostop all the time
but as i thought about it throught the day
the love her ran away
u were to worryed about other guys
to busy cryign about other lyes
im tired of hearing ur cry
u had ur chance and u let it past ur eyes
andas i look bak now and then
im glad i was always only a friend
i guess life had changed my plan
its been a while since i thought about back then
but now i guess im over u
and maybe i just got throguh to u
i bet ur hearing this song
and ur singing along
i knou wished u had me
i kno u wished u had picked me
maybe it was not ment to be
maybe fate has somethign else for me
maybe fate knew i would waste my time
maybe i born to write this rhyme
maybe life neded me
to be everythign i could be
and maybe u were not enough
maybe i was just to tough
maybe i was always better
maybe u were never even come close
maybe i chosen to outspoke
maybe i was to be the one
the one dat escaped ur grasp
maybe the guy that wasnt ment tokiss ur ass
and i kno u want me cuz im the one u never had
im the one u could never have bak
and as u reflect back on ur past
u noticed i am the first and last
to love u and be intrested
to bad i was diffrent
to bad i wasnt settleing for less
to best u were to concerned about ur breasts
maybe i am the right guy
but i guess ull never kno
and for now until i die
im the one stealing the show
i walked away
alone on a rainy day
she was still on my mind
nostop all the time
but as i thought about it throught the day
the love her ran away
u were to worryed about other guys
to busy cryign about other lyes
im tired of hearing ur cry
u had ur chance and u let it past ur eyes
andas i look bak now and then
im glad i was always only a friend
and pleaseeee can u check out my other songs thnx
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the lyrics are good and ilove this line
"there was a girl mean and cold
but every where she went romance rose
she was like potsmoke
so addicting "
but it has no flow. you have to master the flow, that makes a lot of the song.I’d give it a 5
Wow, i really like it! I think it is very real and discriptive…wow!
i rrreeaaallyyy like it! i am excited to hearing tthat on the radio one day!
ok, i give u a 5 because some things didn’t even make sense and it was to long! I have never seen a song this long
that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow, i like this a lot ^.^ i think you can go far i guess it depends on the beat but yeah its really good i like it i give it an 8
its good. i like it. what genre would you be in?
but now adays it seems like producers arent
even hiring people w/ how good their lyrics are.
its more like how skinny and pretty you are.
and if you have that "hollywood" look
but dont give up. and good luck.
i tihnk it was amazing i give u an 8 i would give u a ten but it was super long so ya