This is for my book The Dark Mysterians: Gathering of the Horsemen
Fourteen-year-old Joseph Whitman, suffering from amnesia and not able to remember his own mother’s name, struggles with a new city, new school, and new life. Upon the arrival to his second chance in life, Joseph befriends three other teenagers with extraordinary capabilities. But when Joseph learns of his destiny, to fulfill a position as one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse and aid in the destruction of Earth, his life starts spiraling out of control.
Filled with angels, demons, half breeds, witches, werewolves, vampires and more, this epic novel will put Joseph at his wit’s end and the edge of breaking point, leading up to the final climatic scene where he either realizes that the Apocalypse is an inevitable end, or commences himself into a full-fledge mental shutdown.
It’s kind of rough and misses the comedy, romance, and horror scenes that takes place in the book, but this is what I used to query for literary agents to consider my novel. Only one agency (WritersHouse) accepted it, and I think that’s kind of bad but also normal since their so busy and since I’m only 14. Is there any advice I can take?
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My boyfriend and I have been together 2 years. Planning on getting married. He has always had trust issues, however said I was the only girl he ever trusted. Well, a few weeks ago, after I had just recovered from a Staph infection and hadn’t seen him for a week, he told me he was going to fix his car. He didn’t come home until 1am, had gone to a friends all night. The next morning I called and he didn’t seem to think this was a big deal at all. I was SO frustrated because I had previously explained to him how it hurts me when he just goes off without letting me know, I get worried. So I did the same, I went and disregarded his feelings like he had done mine and hung out with a few old guy friends that he HATES! Well I told him about it, he almost broke up with me… we made up. He found out more of the situation I didn’t tell him about, he agreed our love was strong enough to get through, but wants a week long break, still talking but not seeing each other because he was hurt by this.
I am really unsure whether this break will just give him time to get over me, or will really strengthen our relationship? He says that maybe a week long break will help us appreciate each other, but I told him I don’t understand how we can work on our relationship if we aren’t even around each other. Not to mention, we have already spent a week apart and that didn’t make him appreciate me at all, that is how the whole thing started. I apologized and admitted I was VERY immature about the whole thing, I had just reached a breaking point. I love him so much, I am just scared that this break is going to turn into a break up. He assures me that it won’t, but I just have a feeling….
I realize I was being very immature, but I was so upset and made an irrational decision. I know perfectly well that two wrongs don’t make a right. However, he had gone out all night after an entire week of him just dissapearing and not letting me know what was going on, saying he would call me at a certain time and calling me 5-6 hours after that. I have anxiety issues and get really worried about him when I can’t contact him and he said he was going to the store 5 hours ago and still hasn’t come home yet. I had told him daily about how it made me feel and why, I was sitting at home with a Staph infection and would wait for his call and he would just disregard the fact that he said he would come home and call me. Then, the day after I can start seeing him again, after a week of not seeing me, he leaves the entire day when we were supposed to chill and just never let me know. I was very worried and it made me mad because he knew I would be worried and upset and did it anyways.
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I broke up with my girlfriend just recently, and now, I am at my breaking point that "I cannot stand a relationship anymore" I have been banging my head on the wall, angry at myself, and really frustrated, telling myself that I give up in finding a relationship, like raising a white flag of surrender. I really do not know why that happens, but it’s really tough to find a great relationship nowadays. I mean, I cannot really find a person who can really make me happy. I am age 20 and have some decent friends.
I am currently in college right now, about to transfer to a university next year. I am doing very well with my studies right now, and I am seeking for a new relationship to complement my studies. I am ready to work on anything and everything a relationship requires (i.e. seeing the girl all the time, spending time with her, etc), but I don’t know what to look for when a girl is interested in me. I love the music, arts, architecture, books, and traveling around, but still, I don’t get the girl that I really want.
What I want to hear from you are the following: some advice that you can give me on how I will deal my "giving up" situation in a relationship and how to recover from a sudden break up, tips on how I will find/search my next girlfriend, and what signs do I look for when a girl is interested in starting a relationship with me. I am more than willing to hear some answers from you. Thanks for your time and help!
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I have been married for 3 years and together with my Husband for 7 years. I am 26 years old. Everything was going great until a month ago. I felt as though my whole world collapsed. I couldnt decide if i loved my husband anymore. this broke my heart. i kept looking at him and trying to decide. I am off sick from work with depression because of it and i just want things back to normal i keep telling myself.
I decided if i didnt want to be with my husband anymore i was going to end my own life. i am so scared of failing my marriage because i made my vows and told myself i would never stray from my hubby.
i had a turbulant childhood, always moving around and i went to 11 different schools. my dad was never known to me so it was always just my mum and siblings who had different fathers. I explain this as i am trying to put my problems down to my childhood. Perhaps i am just ready to move on as i have never been stable? i knew i loved my husband but i dont know now.
we bought a wonderful house and i learnt to drive and got a new car of my own and got a dog and a good job and eveything i have ever wanted but now i dont want any of it. I hate the way i am feeling. I know i have to stay and try and sort things out with my hubby but i cant even go home, i am staying with my in-laws as it upsets me to go home.
as i have said i wanted to die because of these feelings taking over me but i dont know what to do. He hasnt done anything wrong and is the sweetest guy in the world, i just dont feel that buzz any more and how do you know if you truley love someone?
My mum was married 5 times before she died when i was 16 and she had 7 children. I dont want to be like this and have worked really hard to avoid it but I am now at breaking point.
Please help, I need encouragement to stay and battle through. I dont want to run away again.
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