I’m trying to write a novel, because I love to write and because I thought of something that I think is original, and interesting. I’ve shared the story with a few of my really close friends, and they all said they liked it. But you know how friends can be… they’ll say anything to make you feel good. So I’m not sure if I really believe them. Could you read my prologue and the descriptions of some of my characters, and tell me what you think? I want to know what you honestly feel about it. Don’t lie, please.

Here are the main character’s personality descriptions:
Ariana Chase: Ariana is 17 years old. She is anti-social and pessimistic, but she has a good sense of humor. Ariana has little patience with most anyone, and she can be very stubborn. Ari is klutzy but she’s smart, and always gets A’s on her reports; but she isn’t a nerd. Ariana is a proud vegetarian. She never wanted a boyfriend, but ended up with one anyway. Romance isn’t something she’s interested in. Ari has a caring and understanding side that she doesn’t show very much. She’s good at lying and acting, but she doesn’t do either very often. She’s also very artistic, and loves little kids (they’re the only people she has any patience with).Ariana can easily pick up on people emotions, even if they aren’t giving any sign of how they feel.

Owen Chase: 14 year old Owen is a kind natured kid. He’s very sensitive, and patient with people. Like his sister, he’s smart but not in the same way as Ariana. Owen can think fast to get out of sticky situations, and he’s good at thinking of plans. Owen is very observant and curious. He tends to overreact to things. He’s a fast learner.

Juliet Chase: Juliet is Ariana and Owen’s mother. Juliet has lots of secret plans and is the protagonist in the story. She’s cruel and harsh. She never lets people off easy, and she doesn’t give any second chances. Juliet overreacts a lot.

Jacob Parker: Jacob is Ari’s boyfriend. Jacob has a good sense of humor, and like Ari has little patience. He can be romantic once in a while, and when he tries to around Ariana, it gets on her nerves. Jacob can be rude, and a lot of times speaks or acts without thinking. He’s very outgoing and hardly ever gets embarrassed. Jake tries to act smart around Ari, but he can be very dense at times. He can be a bit of a show off, and he doesn’t even realize it. Jacob has a good sense of direction, and doesn’t get lost. He can be very secretive, and is good at persuading people. Jake is 17.

Nakia Overon: Nakia is also 17 years old. She is Ari’s best friend, and they have known each other since first grade. Nakia is very caring, patient, and optimistic. She can find good in just about everything except for raisins and the color pink. Nakia isn’t girly, but she’s not a Tomboy either. She can be shy and stubborn.

This is the prologue:
Rain poured down on me, beating into my skin. Soaking wet hair clung to my face. A faint sound called to me. Like an angel calling me to heaven, it sounded sweet and gentle. I was almost sure I was dead. What other explanation was there for all of this?
“Ariana,” the sweet voice cried out, “Ariana, where are you? I know you’re here.” Brush rustled softly, but it sounded faint. Everything sounded far off and in the distance, as if it were slowly fading away.
Groggy eyelids began to fall over my tired eyes. Hunger rang in my stomach, like someone in jail, rattling the bars to try to escape. “Ariana? Come here. Help me find you. It’s Jacob. Ari?”

Please tell me what you really think of the prologue, and the characters. Feel free to give any writing advice, and suggestions for things you think I should change. I also want to change Nakia’s name, so if you have suggestions, please tell me. Also, I want to change all of their last names, but I don’t know what to change them to.
Please give me truthful suggestions, and tell me what you think of the characters and prologue!
Thank you!

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Enjoy! Movie clips from: Poseidon Crank Impudent Days (Дерзкие Дни) London Music: Haddaway – What Is Love Jefferson Starship – Miracles The Crystal Method – Glass Breaker The Perishers – Nothing Like You And I Troy Bonnes – Crime DISCLAMER: THIS VIDEO IS NON-PROFIT AND JUST FOR ENTERTAINMENT.

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I’m not saying that emotions are useless,but simply holding you from doing a certain action. I dint like to get personal, but i can tell you that i could do so much if i dint have any strong hold on my emotions.

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Does anyone have any advise on how to cope with a breakup after 4 years? we had a child together but he was very mentally abusive to my seven year old so I made him leave but now I have so many different emotions I don’t know what to feel exactly…

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About 5 weeks ago, my boyfriend broke up with me because he couldn’t take the cycle of us fighting each other every week. I couldn’t too, but I was the type to never give up. I was so shocked and emotionally out of control. A week after that, (I know this was a big booboo since I wasn’t emotionally ready yet and I was just afraid he’d start to "forget" me) we met up and I gave him a letter containing my apology, an explanation, the fact that I’m still willing to make it work between us, and asked for another chance. We could try it his way, without rushing the relationship like I did. He gave me a reply a whole week after saying that we were just too different, specifically on how we viewed love and relationships, and he just doesn’t think we’re both what each other wanted – at least at this point in our lives. We just weren’t emotionally equipped to handle each other and it’s unfair if we jump back into another relationship if we’re not ready. He says we both need a lot of growing up to do. "It’s better the way things are now." He said sorry, but that’s what he truly believed.

I replied three days after, thanking him for everything and agreeing with the breakup. I did sincerely mean it. But I’m afraid I made the letter sound as if it was a "goodbye forever" letter. It’s going to be 3 weeks since we haven’t corresponded and in that time, I’ve learned to calm down and evaluate everything again. I came to realize my faults and his. And I’m making a conscious effort to adjust my bad habits too. I think I’m getting to the "anger" part, after which, I know I should start forgiving. I’m giving myself 2 more weeks to settle my emotions down but I’m pretty confident, I’ll be good to go by then.

I’m planning on trying to contact him again, when I’m ready. But I’m a bit apprehensive because I’m not exactly sure what he meant when he said "at least at this point of our lives." Is 1 month too soon for him? How much more time do you think he needs? Also, how do I start approaching him?

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My girlfriend and I broke up for the second time back in January. It was because she needed a break from me and it was to much for her. She had be avoiding me so I pushed to find out why and I guess she thought it was to much and didn’t like where we were. We have not spoken much since. We talked briefly two weeks ago about our weekend and that type of small talk and then she texted me on friday night. It was the usual back and forth talk and then we preceded to mention that she missed sex with me and how amazing it was. and it was. when we had sex it was so good. She we talked so more and agreed that we should do it that night. I was studying that night so i could not go out like she wanted me to so she was drunk when she sent it but had sobered up when we got together. So we had sex and it was great. It wasn’t awkward and we talked a bit after to catch up. It was not weird. I asked about us and if she wanted to get back together and said no. Didn’t really want to talk about it so she made it clear that she does not want to be with me.

So i left and the next day i talked to her and told her that last night was great and wondered if we could do it again and see where we are. She said we could another time if it worked out and such. But it wont be a regular thing that happens. I can control my emotions and i want to do it but I want to be with her.

She is a very stubborn person and when she makes up her mind on something she sticks with it. So no matter what i say about getting back together she didn’t want to talk about it. But it makes me wonder if she dose not want to get back together and dose not feel the same then she would not want to have sex. When we had sex we had it like when we were dating. It was very passionate.

Now I know a lot of you are going to say to move on and she is not worth it but I love her and I know that she feels the same way. She just does not want to get hurt or make the mistake of getting back together and it dosent work out. My view is we try and what’s the worst that can happen? Then it wasn’t meant to be. I have changed a lot since when we broke up. I have had a lot of time to reflect and realize what I did wrong and I want her to know that and take a chance on me again. I just dont know what to do and want this to work.

Thanks everyone for your help!

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Me and my girlfriend have been going out for 10 months now and i really love her, last night we got into a major argument over her ex, things got bit ruff and i started to yell at her on the phone. her mom saw her crying and told her not to see my again… i visited her the same day to talk to her in person when she came in the car she told me that her mom wouldnt allow for her to talk to me…. after the arguement i triend to explain my self… over the phone but her mom told me that no guy ever made her cry and be down and that she has also dated guys and no one has made her this sad… and im a horrible person< i wanted to tell her mom that she prb never treated her boyfriend like her daughter has treated me but i didnt say it regarding respect. her mom hanged up on me and now her parents are ignoring my calls ( only called twice) … and they think that their daughter bf< me is a very bad boyfriend when they dont even know the whole story… today is second day, yesterday i saw her at college, and i told her i care about her and wish her luck we went away with strong emotions.. towards each other…now im confused on what to do .. i cant really move on without her. i have litterally spend each day seeing her… and i feel like iv lost some really close to me ? i need an advice on if i should move on ? how? if i should try to get back with her? how? how can i fix things with her parent? please i need help!!!

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I’m going freakin crazy with this situation. I don’t know what to do. I feel so numb right now. Please help. This will be long most likely. I just…full detailed on what’s going on. I’ll try and keep it to the point. Just…I need help. Anything.

Me and my ex have been together for about a year. It would have been a year and a month today. I do love him. I do. It’s just…it’s been different for the last month or two of our relationship. We haven’t been connecting as much and he’s been just such an angry person. And he’s not one to show emotions..until…the past month or two. We broke up two weeks ago. Because we were talking and at first we were both fine with breaking up and think it would be best because things didn’t feel right anymore.

But suddenly he turned around and was like "No, I’m not letting you leave me." But the thing is..for the past month or two he told me he was thinking about breaking up with me. Because he said he was loosing feelings for me. Well it turns out he was just saying that because he was mad that I wanted to know what was wrong with our relationship.

This was of coarse before we broke up. Well anyways, two days later he confirmed we should breakup because he figured I would be happier. but he didn’t tell me the last part. Well we started talking that day and I was just like saying I felt like we weren’t right for each other right now and I think he should figure things out first. He doesn’t have a job. Which he thinks is the main problem. But I told him the economy is horrible and I understood.Which I really do. But he might be giving up in college because he thinks he can’t do it anymore. He hasn’t been doign so well because of his sleeping disorder and then he thinks there’s no point in finishing the class or whatever so he ends up failing.

Anyways, yesterday we were hanging out. ((Again I should add only 35% of the time he said he loved me without something being wrong. Anytime else he only said it when something was wrong. and he was sometimes a jerk but I still…loved him.)) I…told him I was dating someone right now. Just to see. He was my first boyfriend and we always told he each other if there was a chance of a second chance we would do it just to test things out. But no guarantees. I share more stuff in common with him. I do only like him.But I can see myself with someone like him. He shares the same values and goals I do and what not. He’s like one of my best friends. I was starting to date him two days ago. he flipped out. And he scared me a bit a to be honest. He was so mad. ((I introduced them to each other a few months ago and they became friends. they hung out about three or four times with me.)) But my ex..freaked out and I actually got scared. He was so angry. Stormed out of the car and was yelling at me and how I should burn in hell with his dad. and…how he should kill my current boyfriend right now. And then he was laughing a bit and said "Your lucky I don’t have my knife on you. for a few seconds there I felt like slitting your throat." and then…he broke down and cried a bit.

And then like after all the yelling and anger and what not we talked more and he kept on saying I was only the icing to his problems and basically destroyed him now. And he was back to the guy I fell in love with. I drove him home that night. and he really wanted me to get back with him and wanted me happy. He said he only said those things because he was angry. and did not really mean them…..and that I should understand that he was just angry at me and my current boyfriend now.
He has never really threatened me like that before.

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My Story:
Two baby sisters(very annoying and destructive)
Step dad (i don’tt get along with at all, mentally abusive relationship)
mom (crazy and stressed out, exhausting)
friends (party too hard, not good to talk to about problems)

My mom just bought a house that needs alot of work so my home life is kinda stressful. Living with my family is very exhausting and lonely. My family is always picking at me, and my friends are bad influences. they drink and smoke weed all the time and they are usually to busy to talk to about anything going wrong. I play Ice hockey but im the only girl on the team which sucks because i dont really feel like im apart of the team. Its also lonely.. then i just got my heart broken by this jerk who led me on and then got back with his ex girlfriend. He left me hanging. and now im really lonely and going through withdrawl from talking to him so much. Also even though there is nothing wrong with my body i have insecurities about it that are eating away at me. i used to be bulimic but i have control of it. i have issues talking to people because i dont feel like i fit in with white or black people because im mixed. I used to not care what people think about me but the people i know are so judgemental and full of themselves. I know that if i could just get out of this city and meet new people i would be fine but im stuck here around the same average guys and evil girls. Also im a sophomore in an awful public school and im in all honor classes. they are extremely challenging. im getting extremely stressed out now that the break is over because i dont know if im going to be able to balance my emotions, my friends and family, sports, and school and i have a bunch of really hard exams coming up and finals. Does anyone know why everything has to be so shitty? Im feeling kinda suicidal and lonely i dont know what to do.. or how to get passed this rough patch in my life because i know when i graduate it will get better. but right now it doesnt feel worth living.

(sorry if i sound emo im not trying to get your pity, i know other people have it much worse i just need some tips) thanks..

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How long does it take for middle school guys to get over a girl? This guy and i were rly close and we told eachother we loved eachother and we never went out but we danced at parties and stuff and then he decides he just wants to be friends and he called me a creeper…so how long will it take for him to get over me. do guys bounce back faster than girls? or are they just really good at hiding their emotions?

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How do you get your man back?

We both have 3 kids each. We have had a very strong, intense and fun year long relationship. We have a lot in common. He is a wonderful man.We have both broached the topic of combining our families. But, the logistics has been daunting. It is causing him anixities. He has 2 smaller children. As a result he has fear of being abandoned by me – I have older children and I am not as tied down as he is.

About a week ago his attitude and behavoir changed and he said he needs time and space to think about this relationship and what he really wants. I have held back some of my emotions as well, because I was not sure about settling down with 2 smaller children.
But over the past week, I have realized I have stronger feelings for him and would be willing to do what it takes to combine our family. How do I address his anxities without being overbearing and get back what we had.

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I will try to make this a brief as possible. I love my wife, we are currently going through the worse part of our marriage now. I myself am able to distinguish lust from emotion, my wife not so lucky she is quite the opposite. She gets attached, recently she expressed the urge to kiss a lesbian. Me being the swinger ideal guy allows it with hopes of possibly seeing where it may spice our already great sex live up.

Fast forward a long talk and quite a few tears she has feeling strong feelings for this woman. She wishes to be with her, I feel powerless, I wish for her to be happy even at the cost of my own happiness. Yet I took an oath to stand by her no matter what. Lately I have become restless with the thoughts of my other self seeing the bad before the good. I am incapable of channeling my love to her, she wants to love again yet she is unable too.

I ask you the internet dwellers: Is there anything I can do to show her how much I wish for her to be madly in love me with me again?
No kids on an insanely awesome little Bull Terrier. The funny thing is, I exceed over everything the lesbian is. I have been there when she was crying, holding her telling her it will be alright we can get through it. Example: Out of the 10 times she has needed the new woman she has been able to talk twice! All 10 time I have been there. She begged her to come over and help solve this she refused.

I know swinging can open a can of worms. I am seeing now not all of us can turn that lust switch off and cut ties to emotions. It was a big mistake I am paying for now. I full fill her needs I offer massages, to cook dinner, go to movies, open the door still, kiss her head, rub her feet when shes cold, tell her I love her many times a day.

She does still speak to her, I know she may need to cut ties and only she can do that. It doesn’t help she feel inadequate for such a great guy as myself she has constantly said she doesn’t deserve my kindness, and I deserve better.
I have read notes, I have read cards, I am at the point where I feel I am fighting a lost cause. She is seeking help it just feel like this is going to drag out and I do not wish for that. She is quite indecisive which makes it worse. There is nothing more painful than seeing the one you love and hold over all others not love you back. She barely knows this woman yet holds her in such high regards, even over her own husband.

She, and even her mom do not know why I stay by her in this darkest time. I do, My oath to her, our family, our friends, and to God. I am just having such a hard time keeping positive. I thank you for all your answers thus far please keep them coming.
I have given her my all, every fiber of my being, every time I even thought of her I texted her, telling her I love you. Deep down we all have two sides, a light and a dark. My dark tells my light it has lost her and to move on make the choice for her & be done with it get on to the healing and the bitches. The few years invested can be re-couped.

Even if I feel it is slightly true, I still am bound by the honor of my word to stay with her till the bitter end. I will continue to strive to show her I care, I love, I wish to have her by my side. I will continue to support her in her seeking help, I would even attend sessions with her if she asked. I will because I love her. I wish nothing but the best for her be it with me or without i am her friend before all, I seek to see her happy, that is why I stay.

To show her I am there for her, to show her I stand by her side even in the face of such a monstrous task ahead of us. To pick her up when she has fallen and carry her on my back.

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The boyfriend is a good friend to his friends (both male and female friends).

The ex-girlfriend used to be a good friend of his before they had a relationship. They haven’t seen/talked to each other for a long time until recently.

Would you just trust him and hope that they just stay as platonic friends, just as he had promised/claimed?

How would you accept that situation? If you do, how do you handle your own emotions/feelings toward it?

Is it fair for the girlfriend if she doesn’t feel comfortable with it? Or does the girlfriend have her own issues if she can’t accept?

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I met this guy online 3 years ago..We had 2 years on and off relationship..year ago we broke up on something stupid but still now I am missing him… The relationship was strange, we would get along and we would talk about everything BUT emotions & our needs and wants. He was 9 years older than I was and we kind of shy away from each other… I thought about the relationship we had and I remember feeling insecure to bring him home when we were together because of his age and the way he looked.. always thought that my family would not accept him because I am an attractive woman. But what I felt was no other man was making me as happy as he was and I really cared about him and I feel like I love him very much…. Now I am missing him and want him to come back to me but don’t even know how to do it without giving him ideas of desperateness. I saw him on the same dating site as I was a month ago but he never tried to talk to me. I would really like to talk to him to tell him how I feel but don’t want him to think that I am despot because I am not, it just I can’t take him out of my mind. I don’t know how to approach him and what to say and I don’t even know if it’s going to be the right thing to do… what if he doesn’t want to hear from me…. Any suggestions??? any comments??? and thanks in advanced for replying ….

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ok so i went out with this boy 9 months ago. and at first it was just a little crush then a big crush then we fell in lovee witheach otherr. we went out for 3 months. then i broke up with him because he was cheating on me (the night of our 3 month anniversary) and so i cried so hard that night i was sick and i cried in the morning and so on and so on. i cried that whole summer. then when we got back to school i was walking down the hallway and who did i see. my ex boyfriend and he was looking like the best thing on this earth. he was staring at me and i was staring at him. but that was it. though. a few weeks after that he starts going out with my friend i was pissed off. (did i mention i was still crying every night because i was STILL inlove with him) but then they broke up and we started talking again. then we went out again OMG i was the happiest girl in the universe until i had to open my big mouth and say that people were talking about us because they was hatin on our relationship. he said he couldnt handle the bullshit so he broke up with me, then he started going out with my friend. i was sooo heartbroken. and so she got my permission to date him cus i cant stop them anyways. then the new girl came and he started going out with her. i was so jealous of her all the dudes wanted her but he had her already. she has hazel eyes and she is "thick" and he says he loves her more than me and it broke me down. because he still loves me and i was his first love. yes…they still go out but me and him still talk and say we love eachother but why is he telling me he loves me and he wants me to have his kids if he has a girlfriend? and why am i still inlove with him after he has put me through so so so so much pain i have been crying over him for 9 months for god’s sake.! i thought i was supposed to get over him. and i think he is playing with my emotions but why am i still inlove with him….why? and he said that when we went out i was a good girl and what he did was wrong and he said when we went out it was good times. it made me feel good and i always forgive him and take him back and he also asked me that if i could get back with him would i ….and i said yes. just like he thought i would and he asked me why. and i wouldnt tell him. then he said "you know that would be my decision though, right?" and that made me mad and he said he can get me anytime he want from whoever and wherever…but i think he was just playing…please help me i know i typed alot but still i really need a answer.. PLEASE

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I want him back and want to see what you think I should do?

I met this guy online 3 years ago..We had 2 years on and off relationship..year ago we broke up on something stupid but still now I am missing him… The relationship was strange, we would get along and we would talk about everything BUT emotions & our needs and wants.

He was 9 years older than I was and we kind of shy away from each other… I thought about the relationship we had and I remember feeling insecure to bring him home when we were together because of his age and the way he looked.. always thought that my family would not accept him because I am an attractive woman. But what I felt was no other man was making me as happy as he was and I really cared about him and I feel like I love him very much…. Now I am missing him and want him to come back to me but don’t even know how to do it without giving him ideas of desperateness.

I saw him on the same dating site as I was a month ago but he never tried to talk to me. I would really like to talk to him to tell him how I feel but don’t want him to think that I am despot because I am not, it just I can’t take him out of my mind. I don’t know how to approach him and what to say and I don’t even know if it’s going to be the right thing to do… what if he doesn’t want to hear from me…. Any suggestions??? any comments??? and thanks in advanced for replying ….

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I have been seeingThis girlfor 5 months (we dont call it dating) and she still wont admit she has feelings for me and she wont use the title Boyfriend Girlfriend. Last summer her boyfriend of 2 years went back to Sri Lanka to take care of his parents after calling a few times he never called agian. she has no idea if he is dead or alive or if her left her for someone else. he was just coming out a marriage when they met so i think she was his rebound. this guy promised her the world and even had a savings account with her to save for a house. she caught him cheating on her once wich means he cheated alot more then once to me. She is never gonna get over this guy cause she has no idea what happend to him and no closer on the relationship. she hides her emotions and never opens up to me. once we were laying in bed and i asked her how does she not get attached to me and she started to cry and said it was because when she does people leave. I really like this girl what should I do

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I was deeply in love with this guy. I loved him with all my heart. I feel as though i will never be able to love somebody else with the same intensity. All these emotions for him have gone to waste, and now I don’t feel like loving anybody again. Did you ever feel this way?

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PS. I’m 14

My very short book review on….
Book: Grave Dirt
By: E.E. Richardson
Published: 2008
Do you like the sound of late night trips to the graveyard, the undead and haunted, abandoned houses? Of course you do. And if you don’t then look away now – as this undeniably wouldn’t be the book for you.
Grave Dirt is a horror story about two teenage friends – Luke and Darren. Moreover, Darren has to deal with his best mate Luke sudden death, and is soon unable to endure the emotions of loneliness and sadness that he is forced to face. The provenance of his feelings come from the fact that he never had a chance to say a proper goodbye to best mate. It’s killing him. Deep inside. Have you ever lost someone? If you have, surely you’ll do whatever it take bring them back?
Darren resorts to drastic and dangerous measures. He turns to his deranged, doddery but dead neighbour, who claimed she was a witch, who’d curse anyone that’d do her wrong. Before she died, she made Darren promise to perform an ancient magic, involving a grave doll that is buried, like priceless treasure somewhere in her house. This ancient magic would release her malevolent ghost, so she can come back, from the dead, once and for all. Naturally, Darren didn’t believe her, so on the day of Luke’s funeral, he inadvertently revives the old key that he stacked away in his cupboard years ago. He soon gets ideas, and makes a memorable but deadly visit to his treacherous neighbours’ house, and uncovers the so called “grave doll.” What happens next is both shocking and scary…
Grave Dirt pulls you in from the very beginning with its easy to read simple narrative. That’s one of the things I like about it. It also has 11 chapters and it took me two days to as read it’s a short story. It has a reading age of 8 and written for 14 , so my opinion it’s perfect for a new beginner of reading, a teenager or busy bee adult. So whether you’re an obsessive Harry potter fan like me or a Harry Potter hater, who complains that it’s “way too long,” you will be happy with this, as it’s only 71 pages and 11 chapters. What’s more, there’s no need to buy it just reserve or find it in your local library. All in all, I’m sure you’ll find this book a delightfully, enjoyable short summer read.
That’s why; I’m giving this book a hard-earned: ****

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How long does it take you to wipe your mind away from someone you loved (who broke up with you), before y’all can start a new relationship feeling free of past emotions?

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I am about ready to pop anyday now. My Sons Father left about 3 weeks ago with no explaination or reasons. He refuses to acknowlege that I am even alive. He went from being there to practically being dead to me. What can I do to make this time easier on myself? I went from having a plan to everything being uncertain. As I said I get no response from him on any of his plans. Now I am trying to face my own emotions and prepare for this baby that is coming any day now on my own.

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My friend and i go into a fight.I tried everything to resolve things but nothing worked. 3 days later i could tell she had completeley moved on with her life by meeting other friends. It really hurt, we used to be really close she was even invited to my cousins wedding. I am over it now but why do people move on so quickly whether boyfriends or ex friends. She did once tell me she keeps all her emotions of pain inside was it a way of dealing with what happend?

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How would you react?
What would you do to stop if from happening?
What emotions would you go through?
What would you feel?

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about two years ago, i caught my girlfriend, whom is now my wife in bed with another man. i was devistated because my girlfriend, whom is also the mother of my daughter, was the sweetest, kindest person i have ever meet. i never expected my wife to cheat on me because i didnt think it was in her nature. after i caught her cheating i broke up with her for several weeks, but due to the fact that i had a daughter with her i took her back. thing have never been the same. i have trouble showing her my emotions and i dont tell her i love her. i know she is sorry and wishes she never did it but i have been having a difficult time forgiving her. now i find myself cheating on her with several hot females. i feel bad afterwords but it dosent seem to make me stop. most of the time i dont even enjoy myself. i care about my wife but i dont love her anymore. i think about leaving her but i cant see myself with anyone else. i also cant imagine my daughter being raised by another man. is it hopeless?

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You broke with him and told him to leave you alone…what would he have to do for you to talk to him or rekindle emotions

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