I found it in my documents while cleaning out my computer. I always wanted to become a writer and i did but i want to know how my start was. Heres the second chapter.
CHAP 2-Home: Adam approached Walnut Street with happiness. He was feeling particularly happy on this day, and couldn’t figure out why. He saw one of his neighbors walking her lab, and he ran to pet it. The lab was named Maximillion, and everyone loved it. It had the biggest brown eyes. It always smelt like fresh flowers, and its fur was never in knots or curls. He smiled at the woman, whose name was Rosaline. She was a middle aged woman who was actually friendly to the kids in the neighborhood. She even brings out fresh baked cookies and milk and leaves them on a table outside her house. “Well Adam, you’ve certainly grown taller over the summer” she said in her old dry voice. “Well you’ve grown older over the summer” Adam joked. In this community it was okay to say jokes and make playful fun about someone. Rosaline threw back her head and hollered out a laugh. She then grabbed his cheeks “Well you’ve become a smart alec”. He laughed and said goodbye. He walked over to his house. His father had a meeting today and his mother didn’t get home until 6pm. He cursed himself when he got to the front mahogany door. He had forgotten his key in his room. But it was fine because his father always left a spare key under a flower pot on his porch. He struggled to lift the flowerpot. When he finally got it up and moved it, a worm squiggled under the pot. He didn’t wish to harm it like most boys. He picked it up and gently put it down in the top of the pot. It buried itself down in to the fertile soil. He grabbed the key and brushed the dirt off of it. He moved the pot back to its original spot. He sunk the key into the door. It opened perfectly because his father had just recently installed the door. He stepped into the quiet house. He kicked off his muddy sneakers. He took the candy bar out of his pocket. He began unwrapping it and called his mother. He talked about how his day was and how her day was still going. He said I love you and hung up. He took a bite of the creamy milk chocolate. He filled his mouth with joy. He decided to do his homework and get it out of the way. He stomped up the stairs carrying his 15pound book bag. The only things he had for homework was to do a 200word essay about how Abraham Lincoln tried to get the Union back together and a…….. he turned into his room, and saw a man sitting in his computer chair looking at him. The man was a young man who had a on a black turtleneck and black sweatpants. Adam dropped his book bag. It landed with a thud on the hardwood floor. The man stood up and was surprisingly tall. He moved towards Adam with a look in his eyes that wasn’t really evil but more of a comforting look. The man had a long slender face. He had on black leather gloves that showed the boniness of his fingers. He stopped 5ft. in front of Adam. Adams bones were frozen but did not want to run away. He could not speak. The man spoke in a soft voice. “I saw you admiring my work”. Adam grew even stiffer, and he knew the man was the man who killed the man this morning. The mans eyes shifted from Adam to his chocolate bar. “Is that chocolate?” Adam still couldn’t speak, but he nodded his head. “May I?”Adam didn’t know what the man wanted but he handed him the chocolate bar. The mans lips touched the bar and his eyes widened. “I haven’t hade chocolate in 10years.” Adams voiced opened and he spoke. “I…I..a….wh..who are you?” The man looked at him puzzled and then he threw the chocolate bar at the wall and grabbed Adam by the arm. The man had a fearsome and strong grip and Adam tried to struggled out. The man turned him around and bent him over on the bed. Adam was afraid that the man might rape him and he shut his eyes tight. Who am I? the man asked. “I am an angel”. Adam knew the man as going to kill him. He said prayers in his head. The man pulled softly at adams hair. “Do you want to be saved”
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is this a good beginning of a book I am writing?
"Oliver, time to get ready for school." I got up with my eyes closed and fell off. I opened them and the calendar was right infront of my noise. I looked at the picture of a poodle. My dream has always been having a poodle since I was five. Now I am twelve going into seventh grade. Everytime I ask my dad and mom they say no. They think that dogs are smelly and bark to much. Once I used a spell to make a dust bunny into a poodle, but it turned into a bunny. My dad took the gun and shot it. They don’t like anything that has fur. When I was born I was almost got shot. Luckly my grandma was there to save my life. Shes the only one that says I can get a Poodle.
"Oliver, if you aren’t down here in one minute, I am going to take away your wand." I looked at the date finally and noticed that it was the first day of school. I though the calendar at my closet. I got up and went down for breakfast.
"Good morning Oliver." My mom greated me with a plate of pancaks. I growled at her.
"Wow someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed today." My granda good mornings are allways a quote. I got up and ran to get a hug from her.
"Hi grandma."She stopped and pointed to my food. I went and sat down and she sat infront of me. My grandma is my favorite person in the world.
"Can I have some food please."
"Yes ma." My mom gave her some pancakes.
"So Oliver, are you exicited?" No, school stinks here in Terry Montana.
"Yes I am, can’t wait." I tried to make it sound confessining, but grandma wasn’t buying it.
"Here come with me." We went in her room and we went in her closet. Her closet is a room. There is a bench on both sides and her walls are mirors. It’s just like her own store. It has isles and some tags are still on some clothes. She drew a pitchure of it and I used my magic to make it what she wants. Since I don’t have a closet I store my stuff in here. I just take up a corner.
"Pick what you want." i ran up and down the isles looking, but I didn’t find anything. I sat on a bench and looke down this one isle. Grandma walked down the isle with a brown jacket with a pink shirt that had a peace sign on it. I picked it up and got my wand out.
" Too big, too small, make it be the correct size." It shrunk and I put it on. I put my wand on the chair.
"Thank you grandma. hey can I just wear checkered pants?"
‘Do what you want." I went in my corner and got out a pink and brown checkered pants thatmatched and put it on. i ran to my grandma and gave her the biggest hug. She is a life saver. I went in the bath room and brushed my teeth. I spit and it went on the counter.
"Man, now I have to clean that up again." I got my wand out and pointed it to my spit on the counter.
"Clean up the mess and make it sparkle." I put my blonde hair up in half up and half down hairdo. I went in the kitchen where grandma was making my lunch.
"Thanks grandma, but I was thinking about buying today." She nodded.
"This is for me you silly you can get what you want at school." She handed me my backbag and shoved me out of the house. I ran to the bus stop. When I got there my best friend susan was there and hugged me.She has duty brown hair. I couldn’t breathe.
"Okay can’t breathe. She let go and held me to take a look.
"I didn’t know you had that shirt or that jacket.. Oh." She knows that I am a wizard. I told her the first day of third grade and took me for advantege. she made me make her lunch, give her free outfits, and so many things. Then I stood up for myself and now she doesn’t. We have been best friends since first grade when she she moved here from Chicago. Grandma sometimes forgets that we aren’t sisters, so she says go get your twin or why spend the night when we live with each other. We always laugh. We have so much history. Once we were at the north pole playing tennis with two penguns that were twins. There names were Garret and Cody. They were so funny. We had a snowball fight with the penguins and susan though a fish on acident and it gave poor garret a black eye.
We were putting our stuff in our lockers. She has one right next to me. I got my wand out and looked around. there was no one here so I pointed it at my locker.
"Too big, too small, make it be the corrct size. " It grown and made it into a room. I went in and waited for Susan to follow, but she just stood there staring. It had a desk and four bean bags.
"Susan, want to share?" She nodded and she put her stuff in a shelf. I put my stuff in an empty shelf. We got out and sat on a empty chair. I looked at my cell phone and I got five text messages from grandma.
I love you.
Good luck!
Text me when you got your locker.
Hows Susan?
No magic. Opps, I already used it. being a wizard is awsome, but it gets it downs. I replied her.
Opps, she’s good, love you allways. I went to my locker and though my cell phone in. I sat next to Susan, and she pointed over my shoulder. I turned a
her parents are crazy and they thought she was a boy at first so they named her oliver.
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My 2year old male cat is allergic to fleas and recently had an infection. He is all treated and flea free now but just before I got to him he got a bite on the upper part of his back/lower neck which he obviously found very painfull/itchy because he scratched it so hard with his back paw it removed the fur around the area and left the skin all red and raw (but not broken).
The bite has gone down but he keeps worrying the sore area with his back paws and removing more fur. I suspect this is a combination of the fact that he’s got into the habit and he’s probably itching as the hair grows back.
I’m wary of taking him to the vets unless I need to since he’s not infected and the skin’s not broken and it doesn’t seem to cause him any pain – he lets me touch the area with no sign of pain. The sore is too low down for a collar to stop him getting to it. Does anyone have any ideas about how I can get him to stop?
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I am San, from princess mononoke for halloween this year. I have the entire costume except the mask. I would like to know any tips about making her mask, And the ears! or mask experiences you have had that would be of help.(2 pics of the mask: http://www.bbc.co.uk/blast/showcase/submitted/images/gallery/12079329082844329206_1.jpg
http://www.fpsmagazine.com/blog/uploaded_images/mononoke-702712.jpg
I am planning to use a hockey mask as the base(i hate wire) with the nose sanded off.. Hockey mask pic: http://www.garmentdistrict.com/store/party/costume/masks/character/hockey.jpg
After that i was going to use paperclay, however everyone said that was stupid, and i should use crayola model magic(CMM) to make the mask, however; here is my delima that i could really use tips on. Last time i used CMM any separate peices i made and attached to the body, fell off! And im scared that that will happen again! I plan to use some rubber sement between the model magic and mask to make sure, and it will be wrapped around the edges of the mask. But what about the eye peices? SHould i try to do it all with one peice of CMM?
Also, model magic, seems to get hard FAST and i dont know if i will have the mask done by the time it starts to dry! Im affraid i will be shaping the eyes and it will get to hard. Please if you have any sugestions! I would like to do the first part of the mask, and then do the eyes separately, but then the falling off thing! HELP! I really need to this to work!
Next is the ears. The cape of her costume is separate, but i plan on attaching a peice of the fur to the mask and then that fur to the cape, however i need to attach the ears somehow so they are VERY secure and stick up. Suggestions?
Lastly, any suggesting on how to attach the mask to the fur?
THanks again!
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