Saw this in the dog section.So I changed it to Horses?

I saw this question in the dog section and thought it would be fun to change it to horses.Thanks to DOBIES ARE GREAT!! Just fill in your horses info.Heres mine

What breed is your Horse?
QH/Standardbred and a Miniature

2. What is your Horse’s given name?
What nicknames do you have for your Horse?
Paco-Paco Bean is his nickname.Magic-Mini is her nickname

3. What’s your Horse’s motto or philosophy on life? Paco-I rule this barn! Magic-Im pregnant,cranky,and I kick.Dont mess with me

4. What’s your Horse’s favorite toy? Paco and Mini dont have toys

6. What’s the quirkiest habit your Horse has? List more than one if you like! Paco likes to eat my hair.

7. What’s the funniest thing your Horse’s ever done that you wish you had caught on video? Cant think of one!

8. What famous person, living or dead, does your pet most resemble physically? What about personality-wise? Paco is like Pee Wee Herman.He is like a giant child.

9. Can your Horse do any unusual tricks? Paco will stomp his foot when he is waiting for his grain.I hate this so I try to think he is just counting.So I guess he can count.

10. If your pet went to college, what would he/she major in? Feel free to make up a major if you like! Paco would be in clown college.He always trys to get people to look at him and he trys to make you laugh.Magic would probably major in Science.She just looks smart and nerdy.

11. Which of the following high school personalities best fits your Horse? Feel free to list as many matches as are appropriate

Class clown, teacher’s pet, brainiac, cheerleader, jock, know-it-all, trouble-maker, class nerd, most likely to succeed, bohemian, promiscuous, most popular, loner, attention deficit disorder, most likely to end up in prison, best dressed, drop out.

Paco is definatly the class clown and attention deficit disorder.Magic is best dressed, and know it all

12. What’s an everyday thing your Horse does that makes you smile/laugh? Seeing Magic and Paco everyday outside my window when I wake up makes me smile.I also love how Paco will come put his head on my shoulder when he knows Im sad

13. What’s the naughtiest thing your Horse’s ever done? Paco bucked my best friend off and broke her cell phone.He was being a brat that day…

14. What’s the sweetest thing your Horse’s ever done? Hmm I dont know

15. What would it sound like if your pet wrote a personals ad? Write a personals ad for your pet! Paco: 16 yrs old 16.3 hh Rabicano gelding looking for a filly who enjoys long walks in the pasture and romantic dinners in the stall.Prefer a filly who can look past my faults and see my big heart instead of my big arthritic knees.

Magic-12 yr old 36′ flashy mare looking for a gelding who is good with foals.Looking for a male who understands my needs and why im so cranky right now.If your out there please call (555)555-5555


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I’m trying to write a novel, because I love to write and because I thought of something that I think is original, and interesting. I’ve shared the story with a few of my really close friends, and they all said they liked it. But you know how friends can be… they’ll say anything to make you feel good. So I’m not sure if I really believe them. Could you read my prologue and the descriptions of some of my characters, and tell me what you think? I want to know what you honestly feel about it. Don’t lie, please.

Here are the main character’s personality descriptions:
Ariana Chase: Ariana is 17 years old. She is anti-social and pessimistic, but she has a good sense of humor. Ariana has little patience with most anyone, and she can be very stubborn. Ari is klutzy but she’s smart, and always gets A’s on her reports; but she isn’t a nerd. Ariana is a proud vegetarian. She never wanted a boyfriend, but ended up with one anyway. Romance isn’t something she’s interested in. Ari has a caring and understanding side that she doesn’t show very much. She’s good at lying and acting, but she doesn’t do either very often. She’s also very artistic, and loves little kids (they’re the only people she has any patience with).Ariana can easily pick up on people emotions, even if they aren’t giving any sign of how they feel.

Owen Chase: 14 year old Owen is a kind natured kid. He’s very sensitive, and patient with people. Like his sister, he’s smart but not in the same way as Ariana. Owen can think fast to get out of sticky situations, and he’s good at thinking of plans. Owen is very observant and curious. He tends to overreact to things. He’s a fast learner.

Juliet Chase: Juliet is Ariana and Owen’s mother. Juliet has lots of secret plans and is the protagonist in the story. She’s cruel and harsh. She never lets people off easy, and she doesn’t give any second chances. Juliet overreacts a lot.

Jacob Parker: Jacob is Ari’s boyfriend. Jacob has a good sense of humor, and like Ari has little patience. He can be romantic once in a while, and when he tries to around Ariana, it gets on her nerves. Jacob can be rude, and a lot of times speaks or acts without thinking. He’s very outgoing and hardly ever gets embarrassed. Jake tries to act smart around Ari, but he can be very dense at times. He can be a bit of a show off, and he doesn’t even realize it. Jacob has a good sense of direction, and doesn’t get lost. He can be very secretive, and is good at persuading people. Jake is 17.

Nakia Overon: Nakia is also 17 years old. She is Ari’s best friend, and they have known each other since first grade. Nakia is very caring, patient, and optimistic. She can find good in just about everything except for raisins and the color pink. Nakia isn’t girly, but she’s not a Tomboy either. She can be shy and stubborn.

This is the prologue:
Rain poured down on me, beating into my skin. Soaking wet hair clung to my face. A faint sound called to me. Like an angel calling me to heaven, it sounded sweet and gentle. I was almost sure I was dead. What other explanation was there for all of this?
“Ariana,” the sweet voice cried out, “Ariana, where are you? I know you’re here.” Brush rustled softly, but it sounded faint. Everything sounded far off and in the distance, as if it were slowly fading away.
Groggy eyelids began to fall over my tired eyes. Hunger rang in my stomach, like someone in jail, rattling the bars to try to escape. “Ariana? Come here. Help me find you. It’s Jacob. Ari?”

Please tell me what you really think of the prologue, and the characters. Feel free to give any writing advice, and suggestions for things you think I should change. I also want to change Nakia’s name, so if you have suggestions, please tell me. Also, I want to change all of their last names, but I don’t know what to change them to.
Please give me truthful suggestions, and tell me what you think of the characters and prologue!
Thank you!


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