In my fantasy story I’m not sure how much to develop my magic system. I’ve got it quite basic as it is, and not much is exlained, even when the characters are ‘taught’ about the magic.

It’s kind of one of those ‘you do this and this happens, it’s just the way it is’ things. But I don’t see how else to explain it — I don’t want to have to weave in some crappy backstory like ”when the olde Gods of Gundoolplar made the worlde theye made the worlde follow certaine rules, and so when ye doeth this, that happens”.

Should I just make it simple, and trust my readers to suspend their belief? (After all they’re not stupid, and the point of fantasy is experiencing something that isn’t real). Or should I create a set of rules and a source of power, along with an origin, and then have to reveal this carefully in a non-exposition way?

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I told him to lose my number if he expects me to keep spoiling him each time we hang out, and he replied "i’ll lose it."

The he replied: "Leave me alone….forever."

It’s been a month (today) with NO CONTACT and I can barely take it anymore. I miss him so much, but he treats me like s***.

I realize I cant change him, but I think I’d rather have him in my life than nothing at all.

What should I do?

I will have NO POWER at all if I am the one to initate contact after the way he treated me.

Arrrgh this sucks!
EDIT: we were never maried, just dating. I fell in love with him, but he just treated me like dirt.


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PLEASSE READ THE WHOLE THING DONT JUST SKIM THROUGH This is an imoprtant question

My husband, is currently deployed and while he is deployed i had allowed someone to stay with me she is a female… This girl and i have got into several altercations and I finnal put my foot down and told her to get out i cut the power and i cut off my phone and internet so she would stop running up the bills. Her boyfrind got out of jail and heard by word of mouth that she had been cheating on him while he was in jail and to cover her ass she called my husband and everything that she was doing she told my husband that i was doing so her boyfriend wouldnt leave her so now my husband believes that i cheated on him and i didnt I never did i havent so much as spoke to anyone but my father and other people in my family. I have never cheated on my husband and i told him that but he dosent believe me. How can i get him to believe the truth over some crazy girls lie? I love my husband so much and we have a child together and i would never do anything to hurt him ever. Someone please help me and actually read the whole story
the only reason i let them stay was b/c i didnt want to see their kids homeless and i realize i made a bad descision but its because im too kind hearted
not all my descisions are bad ones this is indeed one of my bad descisions but it hurts me to know that he might not love me anymore based on a bunch of lies and i cant really work now i have a baby


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