ok so i have to write an essay on: are todays famous people good role models for young people
so this is wat i have can anyone help me edit it and use proper grammer
Today’s famous people are not a good role model for young people because there doing inappropriate things like plastic surgery, bad relationship, and are on too many bad diets. Young people should look up to people like Raven Simon, Oprah Winfrey, and Barrack Obama.
On of the most terrible thing that celebrities do now days is plastic surgery. People like Ashley Simpson, Mickey Rourke, Michael Jackson, Pamela Anderson, and Jessica Simpson have done much plastic surgery and now they look unappealing. Plastic surgery make people look fake, unnatural and make them lose there respect. Plastic surgery has some side effects like disfigurement, illness, infection, and birth defect. This is why it’s not good to do them. Many famous people are obsessed with plastic surgery so they are considered as a bad role model.
Bad relationship is another big thing today. Famous people like to have boy/girl friends but they are not too smart about there decisions. They often make mistake and choose people who are rich and good looking. Most famous people are abusive, sexual, and are not honest. Some example of bad relationship would be Pamela Anderson /Tommy Lee, Charlie Sheen/Denise Richards, and Rihanna /Chris brown.
Bad diets are another big thing today with famous people. Diets like Jenny Craig, Herbal Magic system, my fit, and fit for life often has side effect like gaining weight, gas, throwing up, and stomach ache. It is better not to take these diets. To maintain a healthy fit body its better to eat healthy and exercise. Most celebrities often starve them self and end up with a bad illness.
Young people should look up to teachers and family members as their role models. So as you can see famous people are not a good role model for young people because they do plastic surgery, have bad relationship, and are on too many bad diets
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#02. Paramore – Ignorance
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#06. Green Day – 21 Guns
#07. Miley Cyrus – Party In The U.S.A.
#08. Linkin Park – New Divide
#09. Kid Cudi – Day N Nite
#10. P!NK – Sober
#11. Owl City – Fireflies
#12. Britney Spears – Circus
#13. Drake, Kanye West, Lil Wayne and Eminem – Forever
#14. Kelly Clarkson – My Life Would Suck Without You
#15. Kings of Leon – Use Somebody
#16. Rob Thomas – Her Diamonds
#17. Demi Lovato – Don’t Forget
#18. Flyleaf – Again
#19. Colbie Caillat – Fallin’ For You
#20. Jay-Z, Rihanna, and Kanye West – Run This Town
#21. Cobra Starship featuring Leighton Meester – Good Giirls Goo Bad
#22. Jamie Foxx & T-Pain – Blame It
#23. Tokio Hotel – Automatic
#24. Katy Perry – Waking Up In Vegas
$ 25. 3OH!3 – Don’ Trust Me
#26. The Dead Weather – It Cuts Like A Buffalo
#27. Jay-Z – DOA (Death of Auto-Tune)
#28. Lady GaGa – Paparazzi
#29. Eminem – We Made You
#30. Keri Hilson, Ne-Yo, & Kanye West – Knocks You Down
#31. Cage The Elephant – Ain’t No Rest For The Wicked
#32. Boys Like Girls – Love Drunk
#33. Jay-Z featuring Alicia Keys – Empire State of Mind
#34. Beyonce – Sweet Dreams
#35. Eminem – 3AM
#36. Taylor Swift – Fifteen
#37. Jay Sean featuring Lil Wayne – Down
#38. The Fray – You Found Me
#39. Mariah Carey – Obsessed
#40. T.I. featuring Justin Timberlake – Dead & Gone
#41. Nickelback – If Today Was Your Last Day
#42. Lady GaGa – Bad Romance
#43. Justin Bieber – One Time
#44. Leighton Meester featuring Robin Thicke – Somebody To Love
#45. Ke$ha – Tik Tok
#46. Shakira – She Wolf
#47. Black Eyed Peas – Boom Boom Pow
#48. The Lonely Island featuring T-Pain – I’m On A Boat
#49. Kelle Pickler – Best Days of Your Life
#50. Jason DeRulo – Whatcha Say
#51. Demi Lovato – Here We Go Again
#52. Beyonce – Halo
#53. PNK – Please Don’t Leave Me
#54. Carrie Underwood – Cowboy Casanova
#55. Disney’s Friends For Change – Send It On
#56. Asher Roth & Cee-Lo – Be By Myself
#57. Whitney Houston – Million Dollar Bill
#58. Black Eyed Peas – I Gotta Feeling
#59. Britney Spears – 3
#60. Muse – Uprising
#61. Morningwood – Best of Me
#62. Selena Gomez & The Scene – Falling Down
#63. Jordin Sparks – Battlefield
#64. Asher Roth – I Love College
#65. Michael Franti & Spearhead – Say Hey (I Love You)
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#67. Carolina Liar – Show Me What I’m Looking For
#68. Pearl Jam – The Fixer
#69. Pitbull – I Know You Want Me (Calle Ocho)
#70. Adele – Hometown Glory
#71.Kristinia DeBarge – Goodbye
#72. P!NK – Funhouse
#73. Hey Monday – How You Love Me Now
#74. Bon Jovi – We Weren’t Born To Follow
#75. Beyonce featuring Lady GaGa – Video Phone
#76. Soulja Boy – Turn My Swag On
#77. Cascada – Evacuate the Dancefloor
#78. Kings of Leon – Notion
#79. Taylor Swift – White Horse
#80. Ashley Tisdale – It’s Alright, It’s OK
#81. Yeah Yeah Yeahs – Heads Will Roll
#82. Eminem – Beautiful
#83. Orianthi – According To You
#84. Silversun Pickups – Panic Switch
#85. Plain White T’s – 1, 2, 3, 4
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#87. Jesse James – Wanted
#88. Fefe DObson – I Want You 2 Watch Me Move
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#90. Jeremih – Birthday Sex
#91. Lily Allen – The Fear
#92. Darius Rucker – Alright
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#94. Death Cab For Cutie – Meet Me On The Equinox
#95. The Ting Tings – That’s Not My Name
#96. Young Money – Every Girl
#97. Mitchel Musso – The In-Crowd
#98. Drake – Best I Ever Had
#99. Uncle Kracker – Smile
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