I just want to get some feedback please! They’re 3 separate songs! THANKS :)

I’m always running around
Always looking down
Just hearing the sounds in my head
Of people telling me that I’m wrong

Always wanting some more
Always looking to score
Opening every door till I find the one
That lead me to where I belong

Another day goes floating by
I look up to the sky
And I’m wonder why
I just can’t spit out those three words

Got my fingers crossed
Got my knees locked
My heart is shot and I think I love you
But what is my love really worth

CHORUS
But when I feel like I found the one
I feel like it’s over and done
Wanna buy a ring and have a son
I always seem to run

I had the chance
To ask her to dance
And show her true romance from my heart
But I passed on it instead

Looked her in the eye
She wanted to cry
Cuz I was that guy that broke her heart
And I felt our love fall dead

She’s wasn’t the first
One that I’d hurt
More like the third or even fourth
That I seem to crush in two

I thought I had changed
Wasn’t the same
Left all my shame in the past
But somehow it catches up with you

CHORUS
But when I feel like I found the one
I feel like it’s over and done
Wanna buy a ring and have a son
I always seem to run

Bridge
Soon enough they’ll come a day
When I mean the words I say
I love you won’t just be for play
Anymoreeeeee

CHORUS
Cuz one day I’ll find the one
It’ll be over and done
I’ll buy a ring and have a son
And have nowhere to run

Stuck here on the side of the road
With no reason to go back home
Ain’t been the same since you left here
Being alones become my biggest fear

I just want to forget the past
But some memories always last
Try to do something new
But everything leads me to you

Chorus
Cuz I’m running forwards
And moving back
I just can’t get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you

I usually don’t act this way
But my bright clouds have turned grey
Everyone see’s the sun still shines
But that’s in their world Cuz’ in mine

Chorus
I’m running forwards
And moving back
I just can’t get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you

I’ve gotta find a way to stop running back to you
And getting no where
I’ve gotta find away to take off these running shoes
And face the truth but till thennnnn

Chorus
I’m running forwards
And moving back
I just can’t get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you

Gliding
Capo 2

I’ve been down before but not like this
Feeling’ like I got nothing to live for anymore

I toss and turn but that’s all right
As long as I live through the night one more time

My dreams are big just like the sky
And one day I’m gonna take flight and fly high

Soar like and eagle just like a bird
Floating in the air to your words your word

CHORUS
I’m gonna to glide into your arms again
Back to where I’m supposed to be
With you right next to me

I’m gonna glide right by your side
Be with you for life
And make you my wife

I’ve been through it all and it’s all through
I’m left with nothing here without you without you

I want you to come down just like the rain
Lay in my arms and wash all the pain all away

Just sit with me and have a talk
Bout all the time that we lost the time we lost

Hold my hand right by your heart
And give this thing another start one more start

CHORUS
I’m gonna glide into your arms again
Back to where I’m supposed to be
With you right next to me

I’m gonna glide right by your side
Be with you for life
And make you my wife

BRIDGE
Nobody said that you had to come back
You make your own choices now
But I’m not just anybody I’m someone
That’s wishes somehow

You would glide into to my arms again
Back to where you’re supposed to be
Holding on to me
You would glide right by my side
Be with me for life
And just be my wife


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Just a few questions I have for you guys and gals…

1. Do you think Humans will ever master DNA? (making our own creations from scratch)

2. If yes to the first question, why is it so far fetched that you might have a creator?

Or is it just the "invisible man and or woman above" kind of creators you don’t believe in?

I’m asking this question again because i was unsatisfied with the answers you had given me last time. You either tap danced around the questions or just rambled on about magic or sky daddy’s. Yes, I want to hear your arguing statements and facts but please answers the questions first.

Arguing Statements / Facts
So, if I made a robot with a true A.I. (or another living organic creature using DNA) I would be it’s creator but since I’m a living, breathing, organic human… I can’t have a creator because who created the creator? Even if it’s improbable that doesn’t make it impossible and shouldn’t be thrown off the scientific table.

Using Drake’s Equation you can see that our Galaxy alone could be teaming with intelligent life. Add to the equation "Could they master star travel? Could they also master DNA? Improbable maybe (I say maybe because that’s just our Galaxy and not the entire universe) that doesn’t make it impossible.

http://www.classbrain.com/artmovies/publish/article_50.shtml

Look at all the machines and tools we have made and entrust our lives to. Sometimes they break down because we the creator who made them are not perfect and therefore none of our tools or machines will never be either. Yes, I know evolution is fact. I’m not THAT stupid but am I going to follow it down until there is nothing left to follow…

Let’s say somehow the 20 different Amino acids that form proteins, formed the proper proteins that became a simple one celled life form.
This is a big stretch, since the simplest bacterium has 30,000 different proteins. (and all these came together by chance, under the right conditions? What are the odds of that?)
DNA is the coded instructions for replication, growth and assembly of all future generations.
The most efficient information storage system in the known universe.
In the original bacterium, there would not have been any DNA to evolve since it was the first of its kind and DNA is inherited.

Where did it come from?

You can’t argue it evolved since according to evolution there must be a originator that was then acted on by the forces of natural selection.

What originated the DNA?

That is no different than saying well if we had a creator who made the creator or what made the thing that made the big bang. It’s funny actually. I love to see Christians and Atheists go at it, I am Agnostic btw. Christians think an invisible man created us and Atheists believe that Energy came from nothing. If you by any chance still reading this I just want to say I know for 100% fact that life comes from life and it happens 100% of the time! Can life happen by chance?
Sure it could anything is possible but since the conditions on earth are perfect, why don’t we see new strains of bacteria springing up all over the place from nothing?

Think for yourself, question authority! – Timothy Leary

A complex creature in a complex ecosystem? who’s to say that we are not part of a bigger even more complex ecosystem known as the universe?

And if you made it down this far I wish I could just give you a million points. If anything I hope it was a good read and you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed typing it…. :) lol
Everyone keeps saying the same thing… yes Humans can master DNA and can become creators…. but we can’t have creators because that’s just ridiculous? You do realize how vast the Universe is? It’s sad to see such closed minded people. Almost as bad as Christians!
Earth is 4.5 to 4.6 billion years old… yet we’ve been around 10,000-20,00 years or so…. Thats a big time gap in there people. If we are around for another 1 billion years or so… will we traveling the stars and seeding planets?


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And I thought, I’ll make up an invisible man who lives in the sky and did all these amazing things, and tell everyone how he controls everything.

I make up lots of stories revolving mostly around this magic man.

I get a load of my friends to distribute and preach about my book.

How long would I have to wait until it’s used as a guideline for it to be accepted as truth and a guideline for many people to base their lives on?


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I wrote this for my writing class, and the first time I kept trailing of the subject. My teacher told me to write it again…
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated
And if you are a pilot or a person in the aviation field, please point out if there are any mistakes on my part, about the facts of the process of becoming a pilot, and how to make parts more simpler so a person not knowing aviation would understand
Or just tell me how I did overall.
Thanks! [:

Cultures Essay

Since a young age, I have been steeped in the culture of aviation. Ever since I could remember, the sound of metal birds never escaped me as I craned my neck and gazed intently upwards trying to spot the tiny speck in the sky. Whatever I was doing was quickly pushed to the back of my mind as my eyes followed airplanes. The roaring power always filled my body with an overwhelming feeling of connecting with the extraordinary flying objects, and my heart would pound with amazement. My eager eyes never wavered as my gaze stayed locked on the majestic ships. Thousands of feet above me they flew, leaving telltale strips of white, sliding behind clouds, trees, buildings and finally the horizon. Always they were escaping my vision, yet never did they escape my heart.

I have always lived in the general area of three major airports- Portland International Airport, Troutdale Airport and Hillsboro Airport, also several military bases, which brought me to see a wide variety of aircraft over the years. In my young mind they were a mystery that I just had to solve, and I set forth reading and watching materials on the subject of aviation. Some of these were an illustrated children’s book- Nobody Owns the Sky: The Story of "Brave Bessie" Coleman and a collection of stories-Teenage Aviation Stories, and movies like- Eyewitness – Flight and The Magic of Flight. With each tidbit of knowledge that I gained about what flying a plane entails and the extraordinary history behind it, the more I felt it becoming part of me. And the more I learned about the industry in general, the more I saw that it was in essence a subculture, made of individuals that achieve the status of pilot with which the individual inherits traditions, a particular lingo, uniforms, and values.

I saw these aspects up close when I attended the Oregon International Airshow in Hillsboro Airport in the summer of 2009. As the Thunderbirds took the stage, flying in from the back, taking everyone in the audience by surprise with the earth-shaking noise, and performing jaw-dropping acts, I fell completely in love. Throughout the show I felt nothing in the world could make me happier, feeling sound vibrations smelling the fuel exhaust and seeing white vapor form on the wings of fighter jets. I was squealing with delight, almost went into a hyperventilating state, and just stood speechlessly stunned. I saw a F-86 Sabre, an F-15 Eagle, a MiG-17 and MiG-21, an F-104G, an A-26 Invader, an UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter, a T-1A Jayhawk, and a HC-130 Hercules among many others. Getting the pilots signatures my hands were trembling and I struggled to keep from jumping up and down and making a fool out of myself. Overall, it was an experience that sealed my plan to become a pilot and will stay imprinted in my mind forever.

Setting aside countless hours to study this subculture, and the amazing feats that are the results of the hard work of pilots, I learned much about what the process they undergo to attain flight. The Federal Aviation Administration has constructed a system, in which an individual takes specific steps and measures, moving up a ladder that will legally enable them to take flight and make a living out of it, if so desired. The common path one would take with this ambition is to first learn what getting a license to fly entails. Then, the first requirement is to get a medical certificate. Next, one would select a flight school and instructor. At this step it is up to the individual to study and train, putting his or her mind and body to the knowledge and skills of operating inside a cockpit. And, now finally they are put to knowledge and practical tests that proof their capabilities. The first solo flight is considered the rite of passage, when a student pilot proves they can handle the aircraft by themselves which is anticipated by students with nervousness and excitement. From there on out the training regimen changes and the student must progress to piloting in more challenging techniques, maneuvers and situations.

From what I have seen and heard of the field of general aviation it is grueling and challenging yet in the end rewarding and satisfying. My personal endeavors into this industry started with my fascination and dedication (bordering on an obsession) to the science and the job. This, I have to this day and it will stick by me, following me through the ups and downs, the hardships and the challenges, and ultimately to the fruits of my labor. Ernest K. Gann
a WWII and airline pilot compared this obsession that connects pilots to a marriage, and flying to “lying with the bride” in his book Fate is the Hunter. This is the biggest connection of pilots from all walks of life, and can in itself define the subculture of aviation. However it is the appearance of pilots and their surroundings that brings the most recognition from those on the outside, looking in. That is the uniforms of pilots, the gear, the equipment, the airports, and of course the aircraft.


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I haven’t written a hatred poem for a long time but I gave my love my life, to this guy and promised him happiness yet he refuse to take it and left me. He refuse to give me a second chance like I gave him. I was left at home suffering and punishing myself every night and crying. The moment he said, "I never want you back" my whole body became numb.
Any suggestion to make this better, please tell me :)
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I woke up choking, struggling for air
I’m short of breath, heart’s beating in pain
My heart’s in the hand of the demon of despair
The fear is making my mind insane

Every night this shadow stands by my bed
Choking my neck and ripping my heart
Putting all these voices in my head
Giving me hope then ripping my skin apart

I filled my heart with hope and love
Forgotten the grief, Forgotten the pain
Prayed for guidance from the sky above
Trusted the false just to feel like I’m sane

My heart only ached for one more chance
Begged the demon to let me free
To reunite with my love, my perfect romance
But I was left dead with terror that I hadn’t foresee

Leaving me with a heart as dark as death
My mind’s too shaken, my vision collapse
Look in to my eyes, there’s nothing left
Traded my heart just for hollow crap

Befriended with lies and unchained your heart
I have blindly free you in to the wrong direction
The stronger my love, the further we part
My love is now a crime, a fatal injection

My gift for you was my heart to take
Lets throw it away like it’s decayed flesh
Trapped in my promise, a promise I won’t break
Now it’s solitude I choose until I’m none but ash

This is the path I have fallen to face
I’ve became my own hate that I’m sick of feeling
Being unbearably punished in my own disgrace
I’ve became my own saviour to stop me from fading

Forget the past, Forget the future
Forget everything that had ever existed
I’m just a blemish in your life that’s nothing but torture
Forget the memories and let it desist

The air sweet with wings now dark with scars
Too afraid to turn back, too afraid to fly
Given up your wish on the shooting star
The wish came true but it never got through your eyes
I am in coma, let the lies eat my mind
Hyperventilate with the voices shattering in my head
Leave me alone where I was left behind
Burden from the past and what lies ahead

This love now fear on the string of a promise
Buried inside a heart as deadly as death
No more to believe, nothing to miss
This love locked away forever from everything that’s left


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