i wrote a love poem PLZ tell me what u think ?

You say u don’t but I they say you do
I don’t know who to believe
I don’t know what to do
I want to love you
But I want to hate you
I want to think they are all wrong
And that you are perfect
Your strong hot nice and fun to be with
But what I didn’t know is I got you all wrong
You’re strong but not strong enough
Your hot but not hot enough
You’re nice but only when you want something
And you’re fun but not fun enough for me
What I thought was the perfect guy is nothing more than your normal every day man whore
I hope I don’t feel for you any more
Your kisses are sweet
But never sweet enough
To cover
The pain you have caused me
You must not feel for me
Because you no longer adore me
It was a one day thing
I hope your girlfriend understands
I’m glad its over
Cuz you don’t deserve me
you don’t deserve some one who loved you so truly and pure
Now I have to find a cure to mend my broken heart
There are many fish in the sea
But you are no longer for me
So please let me be
We can still be friends
But I need some time to think
I need some time to know
If I should ever forgive you for making my heart shrink
I just need some time to grow
Maybe we can try it again
Like you said every one deserves a second chance
But I will never forget when
Our hearts connected our lips touched and I was in love
My heart did a dance
It was young romance
Now all I need is a little shove
To get back to the now
The present were you have a girlfriend
And I have no one
Now I will have to allow
The time for my heart to comprehend
The changes of everything to become undone
I’m crushed
But I don’t expect you to care

ummm well i didn’t finish it yet but i wanna know if its good or if im just wasting my time cuz it sucks
hey i just wanted to say im 13 soo yea this is what i wrote and how i felt or still feel about a guy i had a one day relationships with


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Is my girlfriend losing interest in me?? DO I HAVE TO GET OVER HER?? plzz help!!!?

I’ve been with this girl for over 2 years now. We were in a relationship for about 8 months (on and off, she had broken up 4 times cuz she stopped liking me) and then totally broke up…she strted liking me again recently, about 4 months ago and we got really close. I had liked her all this time, even when she didnt like me. Though, we’re not in a relationship anymore cuz her religion doesnt allow her to. We dont have any physical relationship at all, not even holding hands, she says she feels guilty(we used to hug but no more than tht in our first month and after tht she told me off completely)

I am fine with everything and i love her from all my heart, and i always tell her tht and make her feel special. She told me about 4 months ago she likes me again and i told her i like her as a friend at tht time cuz i didnt want to be hurt again, but she showed me she has changed and so i gave in and told her i like her too. Eventhough we werent in a relationship, we were committed to each other (as in we talked and got mad if the other did something wrong)

Since summer has strted, i’vent seen her. I used to go to her work to see her but she told me she’s not comfortable seeing me during summer, she says "i dont know why, im just gay like tht, it was like this last summer too right? its not like i dont talk to u, its just like im not dying to see u" …so she told me to not go see her anymore.

I dont mind her talking to guys, but the problem is MOST of her friends r guys, and almost ALL of them like her the way i like her (not as MUCH as i love her of course). And she talks on the phone, texts, and talks on msn with them, even when they flirt with her. THe only good thing is she tells me almost everything they say or do. One of them is her coworker and he openly flirts with her and says he wishes she was his wife and says stuff like "i love u beautiful" etc.

The problem is, almost every guy she talks to strts liking her, and then she still reponds the way so tht the guy doesnt stop liking her, like she doesnt want to lose her fan following -_- this just really pisses me off but i cant complain cuz i’ve talked to her about it in the past and she just said "u complain way too much for yr age"

She never says i like u anymore or makes me feel special, and she just sounds soo uninterested when she talks to me on msn or on phone sometimes.

We’re noth 17, she’s turning 18 this month. I am mature enough to let it go if she doesnt like me anymore, it’ll be hard but i’ll have to do it. Plzzz tell me if im over reacting, and plzz dont tell me to talk to her about it and ask her if she likes me cuz whenever i do, she just gets mad at me for being too serious and getting her stressed.

Plzzz plzzzz help me out with this one!!!


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