What do you think of this plot for the first book of my series? Would you read something like this?
Segolene is a redhead fairy (someone who can read minds and has visions of the future) who has washed up on the shores of Utope-the legendary island of the nymphs. No one has entered this island before, and Seg’s entry opens the barriers, making it accesible to anyone.
Seg goes to Puddlefoot, a school of magic, with her nymph friend Cidia (if you’re worried about Puddlefoot being too similar to Hogwarts, it’s not–it’s more selective since there are 6 students per class and they accept all kinds of magical creatures not just fairies. Also, it’s not a boarding school). While there, Cidia gets a letter from a nymph friend saying that Mala, a nymph emprisonned for murder, has escaped. On her wall were written the omnious words: "You will hear of me again".
Later, fairyland declares war on Utope at Mala’s suggestion. Mala says that Utope is a threat, but she really just wants to become queen. At the end of the book, Fairyland wins the war and Mala crowns herself queen–something no one was expecting. She returns the government back to a middle-ages system, with social classes and stuff.
The book is about the war and how Seg is torn between Fairyland and Utope. Her family is also torn apart by Mala– Seg’s mom wants to join her, but her Dad thinks her aims are wrong.
there are also a lot of conflicts in school, teen drama kind of things.
so what do you think? would you read a book like this?
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Astrologers in the Bible… The Lord Jesus is the only ONE that can Tell the Future.. Dividers of the heavens Daniel 1:20 And in all matters of wisdom and understanding, that the king enquired of them, he found them ten times better than all the magicians and astrologers that were in all his realm. Daniel 2:27 and 28 Daniel answered in the presence of the king, and said, The secret which the king hath demanded cannot the wise men, the astrologers, the magicians, and soothsayers, shew unto the king; But there is a God in heaven that revealeth secrets, and maketh known the king Neb-u-chad-nez’-zar what shall be in the latter days. They dream, and the visions of thy head upon they bed, are these; Isaiah 47:1 Come down, and sit in the dust, O virgin daughter of Babylon, sit on the groud: there is no throne O daughter of the Chal-de;-ans: for though shalt no more be called tender and delicate. Isaiah 47: 13 Thou art wearied in the multitude of they counsels, Let now the astrologers, the stargazers, the monthly prognosticators, stand up, and save thee from these things that shall come upon thee. Isaiah 47: 14 Behold, they shall be as stubble; the fire shall burn them; they shall not deliver themselves from the power of the flame; there shall not be a coal of warm at, nor fire to sit before it Daniel 4: 7 Then came in the magicians, the astrologers, the Chal-de’-ans, and the soothsayers: and I told the dreams before them; but they did not make known unto me the interpretation thereof. Daniel 5: 7 and 8 The king cried aloud to bring in the astrologers, the Chal-de’-ans, and the soothsayers. And the king spake, and said to the wise men of Babylon, Whosoever shall read this writing, and shew me the interpretation thereof, shall be clothed with scarlet, and have a chain of gold about his neck, and shall be the third ruler in the kingdom. Then came in all the king’s wise men: but they could not read the writing, nor make known to the king the interpretaton thereof.
The bible say some people will dream dreams and old men heart would fail them because of this….
Some will phrophecey, Yes I didnt say that, but to pay for your future to be told is a differant story…
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